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Yogi
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0 posted 2001-11-06 09:17 PM




All I ever wanted was to love, love for the first time
To share in the excitement that love can show and bring
Wow was I wrong I was the total fool
Losing in love especially when it’s your first love
It is very hard to understand “why”.
I just sat in my room stunned and broken
Crying wondering what I had done wrong
My heart was shattered to pieces and misplaced,
On clouds that floated away never to return
Angels felt my heart breaking
Watching me as there tears fell as soft gentle rain


Then I discovered from a friend
She was all an illusion under a cold-hearted disguise
You had the audacity to say your love for me was true
But how could you have been so cruel and hard-hearted?
If you did not want to be with me
To you and your so-called friends I was just a joke
Why did you string me along, was it wanting to hurt and destroy me?
Was it the sick rush it gave you, an excitement to damage another person?
My heart you did take and you broke it into a thousand pieces
You laughed and turned away and walked of with out saying a single word
I died on that day, would you have cared I guess not
They say love is blind I say It was your loss in the end.

Yogi

[This message has been edited by Yogi (edited 11-06-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-06 09:28 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Yogi, this is so so sad and so heartbreaking! (big hugggssssss) My heart cries out to your pain. Love can indeed be blind, but there is always true love in this world, and your loving heart is destined to find it! (sigh) You are a very loving person and deserve the greatest love! (smiles) Keep the faith, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Yogi, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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