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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-11-06 04:39 PM



My Black And White Day


he reached for my hand
kissed my wrist
reminding me of all
I had missed
calm in the brushing
of lips on skin
adjusting my mind
to where and when
amazed by the gentleness
of a single touch
surprised this gesture
could mean so much
this simple act
took my breath away
vivid color turned around
my black and white day

"I have already paid for my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-11-06 04:57 PM


Helen~I really loved this softly sensual write!  How very gentle it played on my mind after I read it.  
Very nice indeed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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2 posted 2001-11-06 06:51 PM


yep, this will do it, this sounds very nice in a very soft way  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Krawdad
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3 posted 2001-11-07 06:33 PM


Oh, I like, I like.
The color of romance.
Electric, such a kiss, no?

You inspire me once again, lady . . .

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-11-07 06:59 PM


What a powerful encounter

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2001-11-07 07:08 PM


it only takes one small thing. . .

wonderful helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Zinsser
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Calif.
6 posted 2001-11-09 11:20 AM


beautiful......
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