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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-06 03:36 PM


I have left unsaid
the three most important words
no more left unsaid
I now tell you I love you
now I must show that is true
~*~
Inspired by:  With Age


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-06 03:38 PM



And a wonderful inspiration she is, Our Lady Santos...

well done, sir!

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Gaia
2 posted 2001-11-06 03:44 PM


I really love this new series of tributes. You are a first rate Man.
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-11-06 04:24 PM


This is great Interloper.  Although some things are better left unsaid...when it comes to 'I love you' it is better to get it out sooner.  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2001-11-06 06:52 PM


yes, those are the most important words ever...say them as if it were the last time   and pray it's not!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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5 posted 2001-11-06 06:55 PM


Good words to live by. But I wonder why when ever I say it, it seems to be the wrong situation,unwanted, unappreciated.
Sigh
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-11-06 07:44 PM


I don't think those words should ever be left unsaid if it's what you truly feel.  Nicely done, Interloper.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2001-11-06 07:51 PM


BRAVO!!!!A man who not only tells the words but show them as well.   You are a treasure.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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with you
8 posted 2001-11-06 08:13 PM


.......*sigh*........

Tracey
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9 posted 2001-11-06 10:46 PM


You were well inspired. Beautiful words and thoughts in both poems. Lovely.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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10 posted 2001-11-06 10:52 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful! Your heart shines with eternal love so heavenly! (big hugggsssss) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2001-11-06 11:38 PM



Through the sparkle mirrored in eyes...
show her the world and soar together beyond
Through the touch of gentle hand...
show her adoration and the purity of love
Through the embrace in arms of strength...
show her comfort forever and a day

INTERLOPER, me thinx you already know how much I like your poem but I'll say it here anyways.... it's a beautiful write SweetPoetfriend

*~coco~*

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12 posted 2001-11-07 12:47 PM


The only 3 words worth taking such an incredible risk for...well done.
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