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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-06 01:37 PM



Behind closed doors
where dust bunnies
occasionally peek out
from under ruffled
bed skirts...her sighs of
passion send them scurrying
to hide in cozy corners

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2001-11-06 01:54 PM



Some beds hide dust bunnies under them
Others have monsters or an imaginary friend,
To others it's just a dark place and nothing more,
Me I put my mattress firmly on the floor.

Gloom

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-11-06 04:06 PM


How nice and easily sensual

Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-11-06 05:42 PM


easily sensual?  I like that  

thank you lope....


Pro.  thank you, I am glad you liked this.

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Decaflame
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4 posted 2001-11-07 03:48 PM



Well no wonder she's too tired to dust...

Enjoyed!

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Gaia
5 posted 2001-11-07 03:50 PM


This is wonderful! And thanks to 'loper, I didn't miss this little dust devil of delight.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-11-07 04:33 PM


Very nice...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-11-07 04:59 PM


Nice Annie!  Softly sensual!  Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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8 posted 2001-11-07 05:47 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend! (smiles) The joys of lve always fill your sweet words, sweet Annie! (kiss on cheek) I love them all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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9 posted 2001-11-07 06:21 PM


Intriquing title...scared bunnies.  Odd combination but it works.
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
10 posted 2001-11-08 07:30 AM


thanks everyone, I really DO appreciate the comments.  Love "no wonder she's too tired to dust" still giggling over that.

this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart.

rwood
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11 posted 2001-11-08 10:22 PM


How'd you know?   I have those man eaters under my bed! This is really a keeper! I will read this to my Hubby tonight and smack him for tellin'! Very wonderful!


Sincerely,
Regina

JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
12 posted 2001-11-08 10:49 PM


oes the fact thathy are bunnies have anything to do with there productive theme?
cute. J

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