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Kelly409
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since 2001-11-04
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0 posted 2001-11-05 11:21 PM


Anger, Fear, and Envy describe my life each day
Why can't my life be different some way
I am always unhappy with a frown on my face
Don't want to be around people, I need my space
Though I seem happy every day and night
My life seems 2 be one continuous fight
Each day I smile to hide the way I feel
I think its all a part of some package deal
What have I done wrong to deserve my life
I stay awake at night and try to relieve my strife
I take a minute each night to think about the pain
Try to count to 10 before I go insane
The pain is unbearable-I dont want to be here
I want to die and have no fear
My life is one big black hole
But do I dare to tell a soul?

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-11-05 11:26 PM


Sounds like some good reasons to seek some help from someone you trust. Or is this just 'dark' poetry?
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-11-05 11:35 PM


well, ok, I hope this doesn't get me in trouble, Lord knows I'm no troublemaker but you just told the whole world. If this is real get some help ok? Life is worth living, these kinds of thoughts ARE dark. If they're real get some help ok?

      my 2 cents......

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

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