One Thing Before You Go My Dear...

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Open Poetry #16

One Thing Before You Go My Dear...

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2001-11-05 09:24 PM

One thing before you go "My Dear".
The new phrase I'm going to use.
I'll find a task to keep you here.
A small request you won't refuse.

The new phrase I'm going to use.
A few more seconds of your day.
A small request you won't refuse.
Enough that it will make you stay.

A few more seconds of your day.
I want to keep you close to me.
Enough that it will make you stay.
Nothing to hard, so you'll agree.

I want to keep you close to me.
Make you forget its time to go.
Nothing to hard, so you'll agree.
I'll hide my tears so you won't know.

Make you forget its time to go.
I'll find a task to keep you here.
I'll hide my tears so you won't know.
One thing before you go "My dear".

With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-11-05 09:50 PM

(big hugggssssss) I pray with all my heart he will stay and answer all your desires! (sigh) This is so beautifully bittersweet! BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-11-05 09:55 PM

Lucie? This is beautiful...I wish I had written it, because I'm printing this one.
You managed to pick up the pieces of my heart and write it. I thank you.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-05 09:57 PM

Wish I had written this one. Very good, Lucie.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-11-05 10:13 PM

Lucie-

this was great!! really enjoyed
the emotions conveyed in this piece.
take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-11-05 11:10 PM

Good one Lucie. I think I may use that one myself sometime. It's okay, I'll put your copyright on it!!! Seriously, this is a great poem

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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