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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Caressing Whispers By: Noah Eaton 11/5/01 Nylon whispers strum my heartstrings Velvet stars beaconing every lovers wish Sharing heaven with you under the full moon Ogling desires softened in destiny's kiss Kneeling before you, staring into your diamond eyes Watching me drown happily in your loving sea Staring at the same lodestar, singing like turtle doves We are true lovebirds, flying in kismet fantasies Beneath iridescent halcyon skies I'll hold you and sing you my hearts dreams In this carriage of Eden we'll make love As the light rain falls across your face, wearing a starlit veil of passion so lovely Your whisper's caress has melted my heart Scintillating with a love so true My whisper's caress will always chant in your soul For you are my sweetheart, I'll forever love you... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
*sigh*. well, if I was 18 again, I'd be chasing after you to sing these lovely melodies to me!!! Alas, I'm far beyond 18, so I will just dream here alongside you. And a lovely dream it is. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, how sweet of you to say those things about me. Hah, just kidding, Noah. Your dream girl will no doubt float gently from behind the clouds someday, and sweep you off her feet. 'Till then, we get to read these love poems every day.  HAHAHAHA, I meant sweep you off YOUR feet. But the other reply was just too funny to edit out. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Noah! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A smooth silky write Noah...James |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
My whisper's caress will always chant in your soul what a fantastic line..... Look into the eyes of a man and |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So romatically beautiful. Thanks for sharing |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, *sighs* Can you be anymore romantic???  I love reading your poems. The always make me swoon  Wonderful wonderful wonderful!!!Hugs, Tara |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Very romantic indeed. *giggle* I really loved this, Noah. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, you have unlimited love within, and you spread it all around with these lovely poems. But can you please talk to some of the woefully unloving men in the world, and show them how it should be done? Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great work, Noah. Wow. All writing comes |
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