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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-11-05 08:09 PM



There could not be
no other love like this
This love's like no other
it loves alone
At night it searches on
On gray days
it walks alone
To love like this
cannot bring sin
It gives it all
and expects none
It cries on hilltops
with open arms
and as the wind blows
it says your name
in whispers

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-11-05 08:11 PM


and as the wind blows
it says your name
in whispers
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Walker, I love anything to do with whispers in the wind....nice write!  Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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2 posted 2001-11-05 08:12 PM




(big hugggsssss) Yes, and true love is always shining among the rest, for true love brings such great joy always! (smiles) BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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3 posted 2001-11-05 08:16 PM


I love the part "it says your name in whispers" How very romantic. BRAVO!!! Yes, I really like this poem.    

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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