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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-11-05 04:38 PM


With steeled resolve I'll break down her defense
and thence I'll connect with her innermost being .
'Tis no easy conquest by any sense
yet, in her sweet curves it is love that I'm seeing .

Her brown skin so firm responds to my touch .
Plucked from her home now her fate has been sealed .
Resistance is met with more force for it's such
that she must expect and will cause her to yeild .

Some few may think I am callous for this .
That the use of force cannot be justified .
While true in most instances, when they resist,
I've found it's better if more is applied .

If there were more like her I'd do them as well .
We might be nuts, but, I don't eat the shell .

© Copyright 2001 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-05 05:19 PM


LOL, were you eating Brazil nuts, walnuts??? You had me wondering there for a minute. A good twisted nutty tale to squirrel away for a rainy day.
SmittenKitten
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2 posted 2001-11-05 05:29 PM



Dr.Moose~Hehehe   you had me going there for a second too!  Clever clever write cheeky one

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Accordionmaid
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3 posted 2001-11-05 05:29 PM


We're all nuts, Walnuts, we're all nuts.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-11-05 05:32 PM


Well from these words I can conclude that either you love hard nuts or hard to get women...or both...James
Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-05 08:06 PM


Absolutely nutty. *giggling* Very cute writing.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Krawdad
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6 posted 2001-11-05 10:02 PM


Ha!
An admitted nut case!
Goofy Moosey . . .
I love it!
      
    

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


Tracey
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7 posted 2001-11-05 10:02 PM


Cute write Doc. And I like James reply up there!!! lol

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Denise
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8 posted 2001-11-05 11:45 PM


They are sooo worth the effort, though, aren't they? Delightfully nutty poem, Doc!
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9 posted 2001-11-06 01:40 AM


LOL! I get it!!! Great write thanks for sharing!

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