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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2001-11-05 04:27 PM

Young Kelara

at the knee of Elders, listening close
patience not of child, but raw wisdom
laying dormant in young budding mind
ever eager to fully blossom

her attention held fast, her mind recording
all their tales of that gone long ago
consuming words, she felt in her bones
reveling in memories she could not know

things spoken of bygone days
days lost within the passing time
remembered then recited
now hidden in riddle and rhyme

visions revealed, things that will come
heroine yet to be
woman of courage ~
inner voice confiding, “that woman is me”

~SEA~

part 1 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002581.html

part 2 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002667.html

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-05 04:31 PM

visions revealed, things that will come
heroine yet to be
woman of courage ~
inner voice confiding, “that woman is me”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Susan...beautiful!! This is a great series and you know I am loving every line...every stanza.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-11-05 05:18 PM

must have missed part one and two..will have to go look for them and see what I have missed. even without reading them I can see the conclusions of ideas and images in this one.... nicely done SEA....

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-11-05 05:21 PM

Look at you go....

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-11-05 05:21 PM

SEA~ Oh how I love mysteries of the past....and I'm loving this series Susan! You keep awakening my curiousity and my mind wants more!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

5 posted 2001-11-05 05:25 PM

This is a very good mini-series! I am enjoying the unfolding of this blossoming strong, bold character.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-11-05 05:33 PM

Stay strong and sweet Sea...James

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-11-05 06:28 PM

Sue, this is very intriguing...I must go
backward and catch up. NIcely done...

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2001-11-05 07:13 PM

Now this is what your pen has to offer and you are stretching your talent wonderfully in this series. So very nice to see your poetry reaching the new levels that we all knew it could. Thank you for supplying the links to the first two, as I much enjoyed them as well and it saved me from searching for them, not that I wouldn't have but time is precious. This is a night of wonderful reads and your works have been a HUGE part of that. Superb penning and I can't wait to see your growth continue. Bravo.

Auguste

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By the sea

9 posted 2001-11-06 01:56 AM

Susan,

Do you know how it pleasures me to see such writing of yours and to know that this story continues. You're writing just amazes me. I mean it.

I am so proud of the growth I'm seeing here. WELL DONE, sweet friend.

BIG (((hugs))) to you!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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10 posted 2001-11-06 09:24 AM

Allow me to ditto mark and michaels words...
they say it well ...
another one for my collection ...
blossom on girlie-girl

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

11 posted 2001-11-06 10:20 AM

Excellent series! I love the characters and look forward to reading the rest of their story. But now that I'm hooked, you know I'm going to be nagging you to hurry! LOL.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-11-06 10:22 AM

Beautiful, gal. Just plain ole beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

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right next door

13 posted 2001-11-06 10:44 AM

Susan..I love this series of yours.

SEA

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with you

14 posted 2001-11-06 10:59 AM

thank you all so much... I am soooo happy you are enjoying this mini series of mine.

I am having fun with them. (((hugs))) to each of you!!!

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