You give me everlasting life....

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-05 04:17 PM

As my love approaches the eve, I yearn to say...
To say that you...only you have ever...
Ever known the depths of my heart, of my soul.
Known them as no one can or ever will.

As my body turns from young to gracefully old
you still see me as a young man, so alive to you.
You are my fount of youth, my vitality.
My heart beats young tonight as I lie at your side.

Our love physically is soft, tender, joyful, everlasting..
Our love mentally is immense, explosive, dynamic.
My love for you through years never wanes.
You my dear are all this man’s heart can bear.

I look at my twilight with smiles and joyous tears.
For I see you here at my side for the ages to come.
My aging body does not concern me now.
For you and I are one and the same, both young.

When, I ask....might I ever feel I am too old?
Might there ever be a day my heart holds you not?
Is there only enough love to endure middle age?
Or, is there enough to last through all time?

You have given me countless wonderful blessings.
You gave me yourself freely as my first love.
You took me into your arms as your own.
I, my love, my dear...shall forever reside there.

I leave you now as you lie resting so peacefully.
My heart, full of joy remains within you.
My soul clings to my life, wanting not to leave.
For all time I have.... belongs to only you.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-05 04:22 PM

*sigh* this is supremely romantic

loved this

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-05 04:24 PM

Excellent writng.Too bad everyone can't experience this joy.To be loved so much.What a wonderful feeling that would be.It was beautiful and I loved it.
Peaches

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-11-05 04:48 PM

Oh Magnus! *sigh* Oh joy, oh bliss! *sigh*
If only everyone could love like this! Beautiful write my friend.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-11-05 04:52 PM

Wonderful that you can live this life and speak these words of happiness...James

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-11-05 05:48 PM

Magnus~ It is so refreshing to read of love like this...you give me hope

Beautifully written!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2001-11-05 05:52 PM

Oh Magnus, this is a lovely, heartfelt write. I enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-11-05 05:58 PM

So lovely, and yes, it could almost give a woman hope.
Sandra

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-11-05 07:22 PM

Now this is truly love in its purest form. Excellent write, Magnus.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-11-05 08:10 PM

Sue, I am very pleased that you got some
pleasure from this expression of love. I
sometimes don't tell my wife all of my
thoughts like this...but I did read it to
her and she enjoyed it...I am glad you did
as well.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-11-05 08:12 PM

Peaches....I am learning a long hard lesson
of love toward a lady dear to me...I want
her to know that this man cares and that she
is a very important part of my life.... I
hope you can experience that in your life.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-11-05 08:13 PM

Nancy....does this mean you liked this?
A double sigh worth...Hmmmmm. guess it
does....happy you enjoyed it. now...
get busy with the coffee...remember..two spoons of sugar..please and thank you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-11-05 08:15 PM

JM....getting to this level of love takes
a very long time....I am not sure that even
I am there yet...I am still learning each
day...I just say wonderful thoughts more now
than I ever once did before...she deserves
that. I am lucky to have her...not her me.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-11-05 08:16 PM

Krista...if I can give you hope...that is
the greatest thing that I can do. Happy
that you enjoyed these words...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-11-05 08:17 PM

Thanx Chris...my pleasure. pleased that you
enjoyed it.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2001-11-05 08:18 PM

Sandra...sometimes hope requires patience
and a belief in yourself as well. I have
hope for you for you are a beautiful lady.
Best of luck.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

16 posted 2001-11-05 08:18 PM

YES!!
I like it!
I love it!
I want some more of it!
Coffee is being served m'lord.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2001-11-05 08:19 PM

Whew....I am finally getting caught up.
LW...you never have anything but the most
pleasing comments which stick to me like
glue. Thank you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-11-05 08:22 PM

Gee Nancy....you put a chuckle in my gut...Thanx...your expressions are such a
great expression which gives me the
inspiration to go pen some more. I enjoy
giving all of you a smile and giving some
ladies hope as well.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

19 posted 2001-11-05 08:27 PM

This is the ideal, to have a lifelong love, to weather the storms long enough to land on peaceful shores.

Thanks for sharing this love story, it's very encouraging.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

20 posted 2001-11-05 08:32 PM

Is so wonderful to hear this great expression of everlasting love (rare these days) Great poem.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

21 posted 2001-11-05 08:33 PM

Yes Midnitesun...this is the ideal...and I
am trying to get close to it...requires a
lot of commitment from both sides...
thank you for your comments and that this gives one hope...yes it does.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

22 posted 2001-11-05 08:38 PM

Walker...I have found that I can express my
feelings so well here...and I am now beginning to give them to my wife...she is awestruck at what I write...and she loves it.

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