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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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 For my sweet little granddaughter, Abigail What dances through your mind sweet little girl To cause that precious smile of delight Has God sent little angels to unfurl The mysteries of heaven through the night? What secrets would you tell if you could share With us that charming land within your head Do fairies twirl about your teddy bear And sprinkle star-dust magic on your bed? Do tiny pups and kitties roll around In endless play to cause hilarity Within your dreamland world could there be found A doting soul who looks a bit like me? May only good befall you without fail Awake, asleep, forever, Abigail. Snowglobe courtesy of http://www.babys-breath.com/twinkles.html |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
My gosh - You ask a question - "What do you think they dream of?" is what you said, wasn't it? Then you create a heavenly piece to answer your own questions...  |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Very beautiful! |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is so darling! I wonder what babies think of too. They're so much fun!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Yep, that was the question, Nan, and I couldn't get it out of my head! Thanks for the heavenly comment! Thank you Accordianmaid! |
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Denise
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Thanks, Elizabeth! I sure wish they could tell us! But then maybe it's more fun trying to imagine! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Denise! This is just adorable, and oh so sweet! I think they dream about fairies and unicorns, and angels, and carousels and...gee, wouldn't it be wonderful to sleep and dream like a baby again?  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Just read this poem and there you have it, Enchantress! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so beautiful!!! I loved the poem, and the snowglobe Denise! I think babies dream of Angels.... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Denise, this sonnet is so precious! She's lucky to have a Grandma like you!~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* what a precious treasure of words this is for a priceless treasure. I LOVE IT.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, ladies! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Sharon, yes, I'm betting on angels too! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise--any day now I am going to become a grandmother for the first time..I only hope I can do it with as much grace and beautiful poetry as I have seen here. Hugs! |
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Denise
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Thank you, Martie! I'm sure you won't have any problem in that department! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
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Oh, when are my two oldest going to get with it, get married and give ME some grandkids! I loved this! Kathleen |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, Kathleen! I hope you experience the blessing of grandchildren soon! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Denise~ How adorably adorable~ You're so inspired with grandmotherly love~ I'd be willing to wager you 'see' poetically with each look at your grandkids~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Very lovely tribute to innocence. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, Marge and RS for reading and for your lovely replies! Yep, Marge, I think I do look at them that way...never thought about that before! Thanks again! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They tug so at your heart....well done, Denise! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful. I've been trying to put the words together to write something for my new granddaughter and you have just inspired me. Thank you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Karilea and Interloper for reading and for your lovely replies! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Awwww such a beautiful and sweet write for your Gand Daughter Denise. Maree |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Denise, god bless you, this is so sweet and so touching to feel the love of a beautiful grandmother to her sweet Abigail! (sigh) I cried feeling the love of your heart in this beautiful sonnet that sings with innocence and happiness! (big hugggssssss) I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Denise, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You sure can write them Denise Such a beautiful question to ponder and you've certainly answered it well |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, Maree, Noah and Rex for reading and for your beautiful replies! |
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