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peaches73533
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0 posted 2001-11-04 03:37 PM


Two people meet and they become friends.
Their friendship grow stronger and stronger and never ends.
A true friend can sense when you're hurting inside.
A true friend will stick by you by and by.
The friendship you have there's nothing to compare.
The love and the truth that stems from the friendship is what the two of you share.
When you're feeling down and feeling blue.
She's there knowing just what to do.
Sometimes it's the words she says that calms your heart.
Sometimes it's just a hug that can make the waters part.
You share all the joys that come into your life.
But you also share the struggles and the strifes.
The bond that you two have does not have to be spoke.
The love you share will never be broke.
You listen to the advice she gives you and take it to heart.
Even if sometimes you don't agree with the part.
But in the end she's there for you through and through.
Knowing just what to say and just what to do.
For knowing she's a friend is a thought that she's there.
When you're tired,happy,or even scared.
For my friends I have come to find over time.
That you ladies are my friends deep down inside.

Peaches

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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-11-04 05:43 PM


True friends are truly the best!!  Nice work, peaches.  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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2 posted 2001-11-04 05:56 PM


Nice job! I love the way you described what friends really are and do!

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3 posted 2001-11-04 05:59 PM


Remember this....a true friend will be
beside you always....nicely written.
Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-11-04 06:01 PM


Peaches,
A nice write, enjoyed the read.

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