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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
You think that you are nothing- I don't think that judgment's fair For I think there is nothing In the world that can compare To the way you make me feel And the things you've helped me be. You think that you are nothing But you mean so much to me. You are my inspiration, you are the words I write And in my time of darkness You bring a gentle light. You're dear to me as anything And lovely as a song You say that you are nothing But I've proven that's wrong!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
whooo i pretended it was me if you don't mind...hehehe really tho yuh nice write and congrats on your impending 6000 |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Go ahead Walt! You're pretty cool. Thanks for reading and for the congrats!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
the way you speak of this person really shows that they are SPECIAL!! Heartfelt write Elizabeth! |
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BldWhtRose Junior Member
since 2001-09-24
Posts 38Alabama USA |
Breathless.......speechless........again...........SO......beautiful........ How do you keep doing this ? This one is a Hallmark !  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Elizabeth! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful and heartfelt Elizabeth  Maree. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Often those are the best friends. Good poem Elizabeth Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
I like this! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
this reads splendidly and I mean it! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I think you've more than shown they are someone and are very special, Elizabeth. Nice write. All writing comes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely magnificent. Your words and feelings are beautiful and tell them exactly how special they are. BRAVO!!!! I love it.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cool! it never amazes me how a gesture deemed as insignificant by a friend can so warm my heart..and you wrote that well... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Elizabeth ... this is wonderful! What a priceless tribute to a loved one. Excellent cadence and rhyme throughout, a lovely flow! Very much enjoyed your sentiments in this heartfelt piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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