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Misty Rain |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Rolling in and out lost in the fog enveloped in a haze camouflaging the view. Obscured behind a cloud limiting my visibility I long to lie in the sun before it goes down on me. I rise and fall changing with the tides in time on the charts casting shadows in the moonlight. Tear drops in my eyes swirling pools at my feet clouds in the fog misty rains in shades of blue. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Nice to see you BluesSarenade. I love to put a face to a poet. And I love misty rain but not the sadness it brings. There is some so gentle about this poem. BRAVO!!!A wonderful poem from a wonderful lady.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Lovely work! I like a gentle mist. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful write my friend...enjoyed it I did, "...in shades of blue." Nice... jwesley |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely poem. Yes, lying in the sun is much better than the misty shades of blue. I hope the sun shines brightly for you If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
A song like quality in this solemn stroll...blue strokes on the canvas, for sure. Willie B From "The Delta" to Memphis, and on to Chicago...aint nothin' like "The Blues" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful poem "Tear drops in my eyes swirling pools at my feet clouds in the fog misty rains in shades of blue." That is exactly the way I see.. you said it so well. Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good poem. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Beautiful visions, sweet BluesSerenade, I love it! (smiles) Your poetry is beautiful and so enjoyable to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was remarkable. Very nice work. All writing comes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love the mist and the fog, but I do hope the sun shines for you real soon. Maree |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Obscured behind a cloud limiting my visibility I long to lie in the sun before it goes down on me Really loved this verse especially. The sun shines all over your smiling face. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you all for saying the nicest things. The fog will lift when I least expect it, and the sun will come out tomorrow, I just have to believe it will. I appreciate you all, please forgive me if the cats got my tongue. Again, I thank you kindly. |
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