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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-11-03 06:51 PM




...For Noah Eaton, with love...


Square peg in a circle
so-called "peculiar" tastes
pastels, sunsets, ribbons
dreaming when awake
dancing to your drummer
music "they" don't hear
melodies rich in love
echo loud & clear
no one seems to understand
who you are inside
pain you've suffered everyday
the damage to your pride
your heart weaves words
within your soul
that beg to be expressed
words that touch the reader so
& leave them all impressed
tender little angel
who often cries alone
always open, giving
the one pure thing you own
your heart...

Thank you!

*hugs*

~Tier
11/01

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 11-03-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-03 06:55 PM


*sigh* you have woven him perfectly. He will love this beautiful poem. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-03 06:56 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) OH MY GOSH, WHAT CAN I SAY, YOU HAVE TOUCHED MY HEART DEEPLY WITH YOUR BEAUTIFUL WORDS!!! (big hugggssssss) Thank you so very much; you are such a wonderful friend to me as you all are, you all are the best and I love you so much! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus
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3 posted 2001-11-03 07:05 PM


Noah...even I must agree wholeheartedly...
This is you,  in your own glorious self.

Nice Job Tier.

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-11-03 07:05 PM


Thank you, Startime! *smiles*

Noah, when I read your poem "Good morning Cameron" it brought tears to my eyes. I didn't want to just comment, I really wanted you to know that I understood your feelings.  I'm glad you liked this poem, Noah, it means a lot to me...  

*big hugs*

Thank you too, Magnus... *smiles*
*hugs*

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 11-03-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-11-03 07:06 PM


Tiers, you have brought me to tears of joy with this one, for Noah really is special....

HUGS AND a giant THANK YOU, for putting to words some thoughts that were stuck in my quill.

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2001-11-03 07:10 PM


Thank you, Midnitesun, I tried to write what I felt was true of Noah...

*smiles*

~Tier

Tracey
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7 posted 2001-11-04 02:15 AM


These are beautiful words for our Noah. And they are words that I know are echoed by many here, myself included. Thank you for this Tier

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

peaches73533
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8 posted 2001-11-04 02:21 AM


You have brought tears to my eyes with this one.This touched me deeply.
Peaches

wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2001-11-04 02:23 AM


VERY nice write yuh o yuh!
Sven
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10 posted 2001-11-04 06:06 PM


well done my friend. . . you said it perfectly. . .

Noah, there's something to be said for dancing to your own drummer. . . just so long as you never stop listening. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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