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Rick
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0 posted 2001-11-03 05:41 PM



I feel your touch, it warms me
I feel your breath and winds that carry love to me speak
I touch you and a silent bond encompasses
You are my dream, my fulfilment, my love

© Copyright 2001 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-03 05:45 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo tender and romantic! (sigh) Her heart must have melted when you spoke this to her, this is soooooo beautiful! (big hugggssssss) You are a true romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-03 05:48 PM


*sigh* romantically beautiful are your words. You weave such tenderness in your words that I drift away on them. This is a keeper and the lady who inspired them is very lucky to have you.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rwood
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3 posted 2001-11-03 06:01 PM


I feel your touch, it warms me
I feel your breath and winds that carry love to me speak
I touch you and a silent bond encompasses
You are my dream, my fulfilment, my love


Each vision, drawing nearer
To the moment of our Love's embrace, chasing
The webs of nightwings
We touch and float within the flight of fancy
Forever in time, in rhyme, from above


Forgive me....I was enamoured by the verse and had to float along. Simply beautiful...your words..

Sincerely,
Regina

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4 posted 2001-11-03 06:15 PM



Yes, brevity suits you...

rwood
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5 posted 2001-11-04 06:49 AM


Bump......~Too beautiful to be in the back~

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Rick
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6 posted 2001-11-04 07:29 AM


Thank you everyone for your lovely replies, they are wonderful, and to you Regina for bumping it to the front page again.
Nice adding of verse, thanks.


Each vision, drawing nearer
To the moment of our Love's embrace, chasing
The webs of nightwings
We touch and float within the flight of fancy
Forever in time, in rhyme, from above

Embarking on the journey of love
The moonlight rays all tempt above
Embracing hearts to be as one
On passion fly, till journey done


Hope you all stay well and versed.
Sincerely
Rick

vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-11-09 12:28 PM



Rick-
   Such lovely thoughts you've penned here.
   Nicely done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2001-11-09 12:29 PM


o yuh nice!
Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2001-11-09 07:27 AM


Ahhh, such beautiful sentiments Rick ... and the additional lines in your response compliment the first verse wonderfully. Much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2001-11-09 07:05 PM


This is very beautiful
Sandra

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