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Trina
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0 posted 2001-11-03 04:15 PM


You're a man
it doesn't take your broad shoulders
or your muscular form to prove it.
It doesn't take the size and shape of
anything between your thighs, it's there,
nothing can remove it.

It's not your hairy legs or the scent
of your skin that keeps me coming back
I can read you like a book,
a good one that's got me hooked.
I adore you, though I assure you
that it's not even because of your look.

You're a man
forget the outline of your lips
or the color of your eyes
I don't need no description
for my heart never lies

A man, a man in a world
of many others who are better or worst
than yourself.
A man in a world full of liars,cheaters,
haters, and lovers but in my world, in my heart
there's noone else but this man.

© Copyright 2001 Trina - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-03 04:23 PM


Hey Trina!! Nice to meet you I'm Joanna.
This poem is awesome, especially the first stanza! I'm sure that man thinks your just as special! : )

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2 posted 2001-11-03 04:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes he is, and he is the man your beautiful heart is destined to love! (sigh) You describe his special love so well! I love it! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Trina
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3 posted 2001-11-03 04:29 PM


Hey Joanna , thanx alot. I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate you taking time out to read my work, hope you find more of mine u like. I only wish this person felt this way about me, only thing is since I'm only a teenager the so called man would be a boy but even though I was thinking of him when I wrote it I think man fit better than boy,for this particular poem anyway.

Well take care,

Trina

Trina
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4 posted 2001-11-03 04:32 PM


Awww thanx Noah, that's so sweet. I'll keep my hopes up , I don't know about the love part though. I'm a bit young to claim I'm in love. I just like him alot .

Take care,

Trina

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5 posted 2001-11-03 06:01 PM


*grin* there is nothing like the crush of a young lady but you sure make yourself sound mature to me. Very well written.   you never know when he will look your way and think the same kind of thoughts.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Trina
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6 posted 2001-11-03 07:09 PM


well thanx star, I'm glad I have the ability to make myself seem mature through my writing. Thanx for reading and for ur hopeful and encouraging words.

Take care,

Trina

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