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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-11-03 01:27 PM


Something, aptly,
"beautiful"
silver lace,
stars of glitter...
scent of oil,
egyptian musk--
and incense, acrid,
sweet, but bitter...
the touch of satin
lips meet mine...
intensity
of eye, entwined.
Feed the hunger,
never filled--
decant,
from chalice,
slippery, chilled...
Too late,
I feel the glass stem break.
Too late.
I've shattered.
I'm opaque.

I have no instinct for the kill---
I loved you then, I love you still.
Too late, too late...
I hug my knees,
rock to cadence--
no relief...
I'll sleep until
my last dream's done...
to wake to drink
the lust of sun.
A proper prayer,
upon my knees...
to think that you
might just like me...
and show me,trust me,
one page more...
a sky of blue--
the sea of green
horizon, distant,
near the shore...


*repost from Open...8?)


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-11-03 01:32 PM


nice Karen...and so how is it going for you ..*s


I hope well.
((hugs))
Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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2 posted 2001-11-03 05:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo passionate and beautiful! (sigh) Who would not answer your beautiful prayer and rest beside your sweet golden heart? (sigh) Sooooooo gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) Back up to the top you go! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Robert A
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3 posted 2001-11-08 11:38 AM


this is interesting, a little out there, but interesting.
The Lady of Shallot
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4 posted 2001-11-08 02:38 PM


Karen, a very sensual write.  I LOVE sensual writes!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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5 posted 2001-11-08 02:43 PM


Serenity~
Hey girl ... I like it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-11-08 06:23 PM


Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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