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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-11-03 01:10 PM




Thru endless time & space she floated
a lost spirit in search of whatever
would make her whole~
sparkling, glowing, virtually
unnoticed by those whom she passed by
silent tears showering pearls
upon the unsuspecting,
granting wishes & dreams....

Tossed upon the wind here & there
according to it's desire, offering
sincerity to any who would accept
sadness her constant companion
masked always by a tender smile

By chance she flew into his world
A single light in a darkened place
his beauty, breath taking
causing her to falter, pause
uncertain, poised fo flight...

Melodies of his soul beckoned
rocking her gently, soothing her,
stimulating the thing that beat
wildly within her

His heart spoke softly,
telling the history of his world,
the struggle, the darkness, the need,
as she kept up to his rythmic melody

Together, rejoicing with tears
crying out in pain, yeilding
to ecstacy, caressing, floating,
breathing, becoming one, touching,
reaching out, swirling through the stars,

together...

Giving & recieving tenderness,
sharing fears, kisses, & tears
fingers entertwined, locking
until needs were met somwhere
upon the clouds....

Journeying through time and space
She opens her heart & willingly bestows
all of her love, strength, & courage
into his

It revives him, rejuvenates, turns
his whole world bright
she loves him, needs him, waits for him,
because of him, forever~

she continues...



~Tier
8/97

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-11-03 01:32 PM


    
This is poetic beauty, a love story written by a shining star. One to save and savor.

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2001-11-03 01:35 PM


Thank you, Midnitesun...

*smiles*

~Tier

snowpants
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3 posted 2001-11-03 02:20 PM


'Together, rejoicing with tears
crying out in pain, yeilding
to ecstacy, caressing, floating,
breathing, becoming one, touching,
reaching out, swirling through the stars,

together...

Giving & recieving tenderness,
sharing fears, kisses, & tears
fingers entertwined, locking
until needs were met somwhere
upon the clouds....

Journeying through time and space
She opens her heart & willingly bestows
all of her love, strength, & courage
into his'

These are some fantastic lines, Tier...the images are just breathtaking, to say the least...this is one excellent poem!  Very well written--the flow is beautiful!  I love it!

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And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-11-03 02:46 PM


Wow, Tier...this reads like a double shot of pure romance.  I think I'll have another!  Great write.
Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-11-03 03:03 PM


Snowpants, Duncan, thank you so much for reading and even more so for enjoying...

*hugs*

~Tier

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-11-03 04:00 PM


Excellent writing Tier...James
Tali
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7 posted 2001-11-03 04:48 PM


your poem is beautiful.  I was touched by the words, the passion...
Tiersdin
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8 posted 2001-11-03 05:15 PM


Thank you, James & Tali, I appreciate your taking the time to read...

*smiles*

~Tier

Sven
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9 posted 2001-11-03 05:25 PM


well done my friend. . .

from your heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
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10 posted 2001-11-03 05:46 PM


Thank you, Sven...

*smiles*

~Tier

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11 posted 2001-11-04 06:15 PM


I know that I've already commented here Tier. . .but. . . something told me that I should read this again. . . and made me realize. . . that this is how it should always be. . .

and that we will always be looking for that one that we can give ourselves to. . . totally. . . thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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