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Mon Cherie
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0 posted 2001-11-03 12:46 PM


This I wrote in between classes the day after a chat over ICQ with a good friend about how we always come up with excuses for the ones we love...


Love is simple; gently pure
Love is strength to overcome; endure
Love is protection; it selflessly shields
Love comforts sadness and wounds; Love heals
Love never places blame or regrets
Love overlooks unpaid debts
Love is devotion, untainted by force
Love is not sorry; True love is remorse
Love is music; Harmony sings true
Love radiates in every color and hue
Love is acceptance; No need for shame
Love is a merciful, eternal flame
Love is never done or begun
Love is the giving rays of the Sun
Love is the smile on the face of a child
Love has no particular method or style
Love is a gracious, listening ear
Love is the warmth I feel when you're near
Love is honest; It has nothing to hide
Love is the soul in which you confide
Love is encouraging words you say
Love is life's most filling entree
Do you know Love?
I bet you do.
I promise that it knows you, too.

© Copyright 2001 Mon Cherie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-03 12:54 PM


     This is really lovely! You should write between classes again. LOVE is many things, and you've done a great job in listing many aspects of LOVE.
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2 posted 2001-11-03 03:51 PM


I like you thoughts on love...and sometimes love is something we desire with all of our heart...James
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3 posted 2001-11-03 05:21 PM




(big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful! Love is all you and your dear friend said and so much more, as does love always flood your sweet golden heart! (smiles) I LOVE IT, AND I LOVE YOU!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-11-03 05:54 PM


Oh WOW!!!You have gotten it so right. I hope you write some more between classes if this is the kind of masterpieces we get to enjoy. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mon Cherie
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5 posted 2001-11-18 05:40 AM


Thanks Midnitesun, JamesMichael, Mistletoe Angel and Startime!!

Of the few pieces I've written so far, this is one of my favourites coz it's not sad like most of the others. It's juz my musings in general, though I've yet to experience such truly truly sweet love - that tastes like dessert  

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6 posted 2002-02-20 11:45 PM


ooooh girlie, this is some good writing!
LOVE is all the things you have mentioned!

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