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Pumpkin Cinquain
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Pumpkin Cinquain |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Pumpkin Cinquain Vineless The pumpkin sat Its hollow shell waiting For the candle that gives it light, and life. ~sunshinemist~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh was this easy to see the vision of. I never thought of it before but you are right the candle does give it life. Well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ooooh, I like this...it makes me think of the different times in life/living/passing that 'we' wait as merely shells until the true Light fills us and makes us 'alive' beautiful piece! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Startime, thank you very much. I just got into this style of writing and I do like it. Glad you enjoyed! smiles ~Marie~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Vas, thank you kindly for the read and your lovely comments. Yes, I know what that light does, it sure makes us feel alive. Thank you again. smiles ~Marie~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes indeed, the light brings emotion to the sweet jack-o-lanterns face! (big hugggsssssss) Soooooo beautiful, you are so very good at this poetic form! (kiss on cheek) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Noah, Thank you very much for reading and your lovely comments. I do like these cinquains. A new one for me!  ~hugs Marie~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
NICE! i love cinquains too..do continue to share more of your cinquains.. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Faterider, thank you for reading and your nice comment. I do love them too and will post somemore. smiles ~Marie~ |
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