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Marge Tindal
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One More Yesterday

~*Marge Tindal*~

Lord, before you call me home
give me one more yesterday
One more chance to leave a smile
where my heart has played

Just another trip across
the avenue of a loving friend
So that when I am gone
they can softly gather me in

Let my gentle spirit return
to lift them when I'm not here
Lord, just one more yesterday
to gather in their tears

A chance to write another memory
on hearts I must leave behind
Grant me one more yesterday
if you would be so kind

Memories of kindness left
from my heart to another
Then Lord I am ready
to step into forever


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 11-03-2001 10:20 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge--many tomorrows for you...my sis, and even todays, to write about the memories that play within your heart.
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2 posted 11-03-2001 10:33 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

beautiful words...meaningful to all of us here...and wishing you many yesterdays in your future.

hugsss again

Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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3 posted 11-03-2001 10:43 AM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Yes,  I do agree,  just give me one more
yesterday to make things right.  I loved
this poem.  So much truth in the feelings
expressed.
Logan
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Memories of kindness left
from my heart to another

Ahhh, Marge, though, I know, sweet keeper, that you don't keep tab, but don't ever think all those kindesses of yours aren't engraved in all those hearts out there. And you know what? I have the feel you will get that extra yesterday...and then days again, very gentle smile to you, little Goose, with love and a hug
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Margie, always you manage to weave the most wonderful poems with tenderness and insight no matter what the subject might be.

Enjoyed this much...

*smiles*

~Tier
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6 posted 11-03-2001 12:41 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is so beautiful that it drew me to PIP to reply when I was SUPPOSED to only be taking a 10 minute break from my apartment hunting miseries. *G* (I guess I owe you BIG time? *G*)

Sweet lady, I hope your days left on this earth are many... but your kindnesses will endure forever. You touch lives even when you're not trying... and each one you touch is better for the encounter. *S*

Lovely poem... from lovely lady. *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-03-2001).]

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Very nice, Marge! Lovely thoughts!
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Yesterdays, todays, and tomorrows.  All of them will be filled with Marge's hugs.
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(big hugggssssssss) Amen! May your loving heart shine every day until you are ready to be embraced in His world. (smiles) We all love you so much, sweetest of friends! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Yep...one of those Keepers....
Startime
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*sigh* a wonderfully heartfelt prayer that touched me deeply. I LOVE IT!!!A keeper for sure.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Beautiful Marge

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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My second reading of this poem, was even more meaningful than the first!  Great job!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Marge,
It's a keeper! What a fabulous poem and great write. Gotta live like there is no tomorrow. Bless you.  
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 11-06-2001 10:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Martie~
Sweet Sis .. I trust you're right~
But I'm sure gonna write some better yesterdays~

Wynter~
Big hugs, gal~

Magnus~
Thank you so much~

Logan~
Hello, gentle keeper~
I'm gonna make the most of my tomorrow's
before they become my yesterdays~
*LittleGoose* loves you~

Tiersdin~
Thank you very much~

SuthernGal~
You give me so many *giggles*~
Awwwww, you make me little heart feel all warm n' fuzzy~
Thanks, gal~

Denise~
Thank you, my friend~

MidniteSun~
I'm gonna try to leave a passel of 'em~

Noah~
Thank you~

Karilea~
Thanks, hon~

StarTime~
You all are just so nice to me.
Thank you~

Titia~
Thanks very much, my friend~

BettyLou~
Oh, I'm so happy to hear that~
Thank you~

Larry~
I think maybe, 'gotta LOVE like there's no tomorrow'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge-
   This is beautiful...as are your yesterdays,
   todays, and your tomorrows that will
   soon BE yesterdays.
   And, I agree...you have LOTS more 'yesterdays'
   ahead of you.
   Loving the thoughts of this, sweet buddy.
   Love you,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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I just love2read a poem and walk away from it feeling some emotions and that you've done exquisitely here cuz you got me all teary-eyed you sweetPoetFriendMarge...
Hugs2u
*~coco~*
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Marge, you write memories on our hearts every day!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

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Marge,
beautiful and loving write displaying your love, friendship, and faith.  Wonderful write..thank you for this gem to add to the treasure box.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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"Oh" Marge,

This is so beautiful and so very full of love, you are such a special friend and I always look forward to your writing with much eagerness, what a beauty.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Marge Tindal
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Vicky~
Oh, dearest friend ...
I want yesterday back ... and you know just what I mean~
Thank you always for being there with a hug~
I love you sweetie~

CoCoBaci~
Awwww !  I so appreciate that~

EagleOne~
I hope to leave more than I've received~
For my heart runneth over~
Thank you dear gentle man~

GentleSpirit~
Thank you very, very much~

Cerenity~
I so appreciate you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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great writing! I enjoyed this
Marge Tindal
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*sighs* ... just perusing the archives
looking for a tender remember~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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