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Mon Cherie
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0 posted 11-03-2001 08:56 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mon Cherie

Restless
I pace around the empty room
Aimless

Thoughtless
A blank mind and a troubled heart
Frustrated

Defeated
Hands covering my face, I slid onto the floor
Tired

Emotions
They rage in my head
Messy

Excited
A new year, a fresh start
Hopeful

Useless
With no goals, a blank future
Desperation

Happiness
Gathering of family and friends
Joy

Warmth
Love feels my heart
Laughter

Sadness
To be apart from loved ones
Reluctance

Optimistic
It will soon be over, I'll be back
Glad

Gloomy
It seems like a long way
Lonely

[This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 11-03-2001).]

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1 posted 11-03-2001 09:24 AM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

BRAVO!!!!You took so many emotions and drew a perfect picture of each one. I love it. Very well done. I am just glad we don't have them all at once. Can you imagine the turmoil that would create in our heads.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 11-06-2001 07:24 PM       View Profile for The Lady of Shallot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit The Lady of Shallot's Home Page   View IP for The Lady of Shallot

to coin a rock song "it's in the way that you use it......" by Eric Clapton one of my all time favorites...and emotions?  It's all in the way that you use them.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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3 posted 11-06-2001 07:26 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Wonderful expression here, Mon Cherie.  The flow of emotions was remarkable!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Mon, this is so so sad but so so beautiful! (sigh) Soon you will be embraced by such sweet love and your loving heart will forever sing with happiness! (smiles) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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5 posted 11-18-2001 05:27 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

Once again, Thanks for commenting on my work. I'm still trying, and as a friend once told me, write about your experience. And, well, I try to do it.

Those emotions were a tough one to handle when they surfaced almost all at once. At the end, I couldn't even figure whether I should feel happy or hopeless.  

THank goodness, though... it doesn't happen all the time, else I'd be going bonkers soon.  
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6 posted 02-20-2002 11:54 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

wow, I really like your poetry! I also like the lay out of this poem, it brings lots of pictures to my mind.
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wow! I went on that trip! got dizzy!
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