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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-11-03 08:43 AM


In the Mist of Dreams


Resting here, touching time,
when shadows fall,
I am fused to you.


In boundaries of sleep,
within its stillness under nights cover,
my dreamlife begins.

Time segments gather beyond,
the dreams harboring,
holding me fugitive from hours of light.

I escape unto you,
imprison myself in words,
scaling the walls of thought,

hoping when light reappears,
I shall raise the shades on dreams
and before my eyes, I shall see your form.

~Wynter


"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-03-2001).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-11-03 09:02 AM


Maureen,
Nice thoughts, lovely write. *L*

mirror man
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2 posted 2001-11-03 10:19 AM


Very good.  Dream on.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-11-03 10:26 AM


Wynter~

'Time segments gather beyond,
the dreams harboring,
holding me fugitive from hours of light.

I escape unto you,
imprison myself in words,
scaling the walls of thought'


My goodness ... this is simply BEAUTIFUL~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2001-11-03 10:32 AM


Sy, thank you, as always I am happy to have you visit my words. *s

mirror man, you have a wonderful way of describing life..I read some of your thoughts on your website..made me smile as I thought how similar they felt to my own. *s

Hey girl, you snuck in there just as I was about to post my thank yous, Marge... I am in my lonely mood, but somewhat content as I await a friendly form to grace my eyes...it will happen, when the time is right.

{{hugssss}} to you dear one

~Wynter


"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-03-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-11-03 06:11 PM




(smiles) Oh Wynter, this is sooooooo romantic and lovely! (smiles) I have these kind of dreams all the time too, where my lovers face appears from within the mist! (smiles) May you be embraced by true love always! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-11-03 06:18 PM


*sigh* the kind of dreams that quicken the heart. Absolutely beautiful.  Keep dreaming.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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