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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-03 03:09 AM


Heart


Sometimes when we
are apart
I am very lonely
and in my mind
I'm not sure what
I should do.
For even though
life's situations and
circumstance
tend to keep us apart
my heart wants
to be with you.


JamesLee
November03
2001
JinMyHeart
WantsToBe
CloseToYou.

© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
BldWhtRose
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since 2001-09-24
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1 posted 2001-11-03 04:21 AM


                    
I think everyone has been in this situation before, I know I have, my spouse is in the Navy and used to be gone a lot !!!!   But, whatever you do, do not do anything that would cause you to lose the one you love and miss so much, just hold tight and make sure they know how much you want them.... if it is meant to be , it will be !

[This message has been edited by BldWhtRose (edited 11-03-2001).]

Mon Cherie
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2 posted 2001-11-03 08:32 AM


I guess it is so with lovers. Physically apart, yet our souls are together. When you finally meet again, it is like you've n'er been apart before.
rosepetals25
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3 posted 2001-11-03 08:59 AM


James,

     How well I can relate to this poem.  With my love, Dave, being in Texas, these thoughts go through my mind a hundred times a day.  Thank you for sharing.

Hugs,
Tara

SmartChick
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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:10 AM


Oh, this is so sweet.
Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-03 11:05 AM


I am sure she is feeling the same way. That is the way of it for lovers. We miss them when we are not with them. You put it beautifully, my friend. Just hold her tight when she is with you and let her know how much you love her.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2001-11-03 12:32 PM


Short, sweet, and wonderful...

enjoyed this!

~tier

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-11-03 05:17 PM


Wonderful sentiments, James.  Seems we always seem to want what we can never truly have.  Life is just like that I guess.  Nice write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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8 posted 2001-11-03 05:27 PM




(big hugggssssss) Soooooo sad but beautiful! I pray that she may stay close to your loving heart, and you can work out together all that keeps you and her apart! (sigh) My heart is with you, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
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9 posted 2001-11-03 06:22 PM


Love this one, great poem.
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