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Larry C
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0 posted 2001-11-03 12:22 PM


Lucie and the girls take a trip!
By Larry Chadwick

Lucie and her girlfriends went on a getaway,
A five story hotel is where they chose to stay.
Sign said “Women Only” we take no men,
So the girls decided they would go on in.

The Doorman welcomed the ladies in,
This is how we do it when there are no men.
Go floor by floor and see what you may,
Then pick the floor on which you plan to stay.

You shouldn’t have a problem picking one,
The signs will tell just how it is all done.
Excited they could hardly wait to see,
How fun would be this opportunity.

On the first floor this the sign read,
The men here have a love life that is dead.
But there is a possibility that you won’t mind,
Because they are all so sensitive and kind.

Lucie and her friends did let out a roar,
Without hestating they headed for the door.
This trip without the guys was fun so far,
And this was going to beat staying at the bar.

On the second floor this the sign read,
The men here are all awesome in the bed.
But one thing you won’t want to tolerate,
Towards women they are filled with hate.

Lucie and her friends let out a quiet groan,
What was with the men who made you moan.
This trip was harder then what they planned,
It wasn’t easy in this place where men were banned.

On the third floor this the sign read,
The men here are also awesome in the bed.
And they also treat all the women great,
No fools, they wouldn’t take the bait.

Two more floors in this place they had to go,
Could it be better than this, they had to know.
Eagerly they headed for the next floor,
Lucie and her friends wanted to see more.


On the fourth floor this the sign read,
The men here are all awesome in the bed.
Perfect bodies and treat the women great,
They are also single, rich and straight.

Well, one more floor they had to go,
All them felt they really had to know.
If it ever got any better than this,
It would be nothing but total bliss.

On the fifth floor this the sign did read,
There are absolutely no men here indeed.
This floor is to prove a point, if we may,
There is no pleasing Lucie on any day.

© Copyright 2001 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-03 12:30 PM


Where is the map and directions, I need to get to the fourth floor right away. Lucie can have the fifth floor, I've already been stuck there long enough.! LOL, this is funny, Larry.
Larry C
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2 posted 2001-11-03 12:33 PM


Midnitesun,
It pays to have a place scouted in advance, huh? I'm not sure Lucies telling...
Thanks, ain't this fun?

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3 posted 2001-11-03 08:43 AM


This is very good. I like it. But, I think I will go to the 5th floor. I already have a man and I need a break.
Larry C
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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:53 AM


You know, you're a pretty SmartChick!  
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5 posted 2001-11-03 11:20 AM


*giggling wickedly* I'm single so I think I will stay on the fourth floor and see if any of these rare men would be interested in a star.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-11-03 12:28 PM


I've got the penthouse with my baby! He's waiting with bubbles and roses! My hubby would have it all planned.

Sincerely,
Regina

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