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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-02 10:03 PM


And as.....

And as the fall of evening
       steals from me the light of day
So does the soft memory of you
        ever conduct the rhythm of my heart.

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2001-11-02 10:07 PM


Yes...I've been entrapped in the spell you weave...

jwesley

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-02 10:17 PM


Absolutely beautiful. Soft and tender. I love the way this poem feels.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-11-02 11:20 PM




(big huggggsssssss) Aw, this is so sweet and tender! (sigh) Your beautiful words of love always touch and twinkle to his heart! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-11-02 11:27 PM


Well, I'm impressed...great job.  Yep, you got it down.  (I'm also really flattered).  Wow, I have a style...lol.
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5 posted 2001-11-09 02:17 PM


This is such a beautifully written whisper, and is such a nice caressing smile for Duncan.    
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6 posted 2001-11-09 04:28 PM



You borrow style very well....but you share even better....

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