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Ousiders Cattermole
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0 posted 2001-11-02 09:22 PM


Oh he ha he ha the morrow
The pain the pain the sorrow
For leaves on trees squeeze with ease
The knocking knees of tomorrow.


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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-02 09:26 PM


*giggling* okay.   too cute.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

doreen peri
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2 posted 2001-11-02 09:30 PM


this sounds very familiar
Ousiders Cattermole
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3 posted 2001-11-02 09:31 PM


i hope it sounds familiar, its copyrighted in my name.
doreen peri
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4 posted 2001-11-02 09:37 PM


hehe

ok

well, it's really great!!! maybe i've read you somewhere else before.... welcome to the blue pages......


Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-11-02 10:28 PM


Loved the rhyme and rhythm here!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-11-02 11:24 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ousiders, I'm not sure if I've read this before or not, this is quite a catchy and creative rhyme! (sigh) BRAVO!!! I love the liveliness of it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big huggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ousider, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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