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Ousiders Cattermole
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since 11-02-2001
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0 posted 11-02-2001 09:11 PM       View Profile for Ousiders Cattermole   Email Ousiders Cattermole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ousiders Cattermole

In the quaintest little village
This alone heart ever knew,
Behind the snow covered hills
I met one as beautiful as you.

And there to falling in love
We spent the years in wonder,
How it was you came to die
I sit alone to ponder.

But even though the tears billow
The snow still falls in rue,
In autumn I watch the tulips willow
While i sit to thoughts of you.

© Copyright 2001 Ousiders Cattermole - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 10-03-2000
Posts 6143
Canada


1 posted 11-02-2001 09:16 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*sigh* my heart goes out to you in your deep sadness and loss of the one you love so dearly. This poem touched my heart. Welcome to Passions. I know you will love it here..the poets here are the most loving and compassionate of people anywhere.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


2 posted 11-02-2001 09:31 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress


Wonderful First Post!!
Look forward to seeing more from you!
   ~Nancy Lee~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

A Whisper's Caress
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since 11-03-2000
Posts 800
on the horizon of a fairytale


3 posted 11-02-2001 09:37 PM       View Profile for A Whisper's Caress   Email A Whisper's Caress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Whisper's Caress

In autumn I watch the tulips willow
While i sit to thoughts of you.

one little word "to" in place of "of" can
make such a difference in a poem.
no cliches' here. absolutely beautifully sad.
welcome......

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

doreen peri
Member Rara Avis
since 05-25-99
Posts 8028
Virginia


4 posted 11-02-2001 09:38 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

ohmeohmy!!! this is so sad......... so prolific........ so real......

i really love this one!!!!
Midnitesun
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Gaia


5 posted 11-02-2001 09:46 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Welcome. This is a good first post, and you will find many here will share your thoughts.

"In autumn I watch the tulips willow
While i sit to thoughts of you."

Nightshade
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since 08-31-2001
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just out of reach


6 posted 11-02-2001 10:04 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Welcome to Passions - lovely first post. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Lone Wolf
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since 03-16-2000
Posts 5900
Lansing, MI USA


7 posted 11-02-2001 10:19 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Nicely done with smooth flow.  Wonderful first post!  

Welcome to Passions!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


8 posted 11-02-2001 11:01 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I certainly look forward to reading more from you. This is wonderful. Please check your email for a special welcome!  
Sunshine
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since 06-25-99
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Listening to every heart


9 posted 11-03-2001 07:10 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Welcome to Passions!  I look forward to reading more!
Mon Cherie
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Land of Never-ending Summers


10 posted 11-03-2001 09:11 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

Welcome! ^.^

This is a very nicely written poem, but it is very sad....

Looking forward to more!  
Magnus
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South Carolina, USA


11 posted 11-03-2001 06:32 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

A very touching and well said poem of loss.
I hope that you have not experienced these
feelings.  They can last a lifetime.
Songbird
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since 12-15-1999
Posts 2211
California


12 posted 11-23-2001 08:05 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Very well written, life is poetry and poetry is life..the sad and the happy times. Keep writing hope to see more of your poems.
 
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