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Memories |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Memories AMK Nov 2, 2001 Memories of you wash over me They play inside my head for what seems an internity The teardrops fall as I realize things have changed My heart cries out in melancholy and pain We spoke today, but something didn't feel quite right We were quiet, long pauses but there was no argument or fight They say lovers can't be friends, that it's just too hard to do Somehow though still inside my heart, I can't believe that's true I put my heart on the line, I told you how I feel I guess I should have known better, at this rate we will never heal You didn't say you didn't feel the same, you didn't say much To think at one time, we could barely live with out each others touch Well no need to worry, I won't ask you again I know now that we are strictly only friends You're right I have someone who I care about so true I guess I just got misty for a moment, and got lost in the memories of you "I could kiss you in |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* memories will do that to us sometimes. I have always heard that friends make the best lovers. My heart was touched by the tenderness in this beautiful poem.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful write, especially loved the last line...so fitting. jwesley |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I guess I just got misty for a moment, and got lost in the memories of you That line just sums it up perfectly Amy...it is beautiful indeed. I have been following your words of love in the last few weeks, and I hope that it can get back on the right track. You have a beautiful heart, and I hope all will work out as you wish. hugs to you sweet friend If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
memories are the eternal life of Love...... wonderfully spoken, amy!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amy, this is beautifully written and I enjoyed it so much! Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tender and heartfelt, Amy. Wonderful expression here. Hang in there, it'll get better. Those memories seem to sneak up on us when we least expect it. Hoe all is well with you, my friend. All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo beautiful! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) You will always hold these beautiful memories close to your heart just as you always love eternally with your loving heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Aimster, "I put my heart on the line, I told you how I feel I guess I should have known better, at this rate we will never heal You didn't say you didn't feel the same, you didn't say much To think at one time, we could barely live with out each others touch" Oh my does that stanza bring back some memories. I feel your pain. Boy have I been at that place.... *sighs* Your emotions are so easily felt with this.. good job Hugs, Tara |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem. Memories do have a way of making is want to hang on. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh.... somehow i feel that this is a rather sad poem. Sometimes I feel that having no memories, is better than having them, coz then we'll not dwell over them over and over again. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your kind replies to my work. as always they are much appreciated. hope you all are doing well. take care. amy "I could kiss you in |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, I had to respond to this. It is a beautiful poem and yes, I do know how you feel. Sometimes, I feel that way about you. Take Care, Laura |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
memories always remain, my friend... I would cling on to them for life, would you? regards to you, Amy, Sudhir |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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