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mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

0 posted 2001-11-02 08:19 PM

see see

Fall the silence, fall the blind
for those who cannot stand
the depth unkind.
To the one you lose,
restless, death spasm in open view,
to the thread cut short,
we see for you.

Roused unquiet, in the dry cell
he near by the step down
returns again youth, well.
What unconnected before,
boisterous and familiar now,
died inside no one time?
Will you with silence lie
to the other worldly,
so covered as her mouth is,
and from your mind always closed
live your familiar earth
and over the black sand stand still?

Or, as Prometheus rolls the world
to alien health and youth,
static power, evening to come,
midnight sun,
learn to lose the one who never left
but fell?
And when,
because noise steps the day to cause,
it was all one, age found?
Will so the pleasure lose,
giving up the lost.
And brother land,
all were uncounted for all.
We feel this too.

It was this:
Unruly penury, problematic urge
with one fault:
giving away the beast free.
And now safe here, unknown,
warned to look away,
they in their rewarded hate
give away the head.
It was the bearer's fault, put down.
As one knew the maze
so the last recovered,
emptied house,
while prim poor cleared the floor,
weak, sober, starved, awkward,
and took the feast fresh home.

The alien land, twisted gods,
twisted eye, only dimly knows
what we in youth all agreed
today is emm see see.

Lucky we.
Roll the wheel.

text and music by mirror man
copyright 2001

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[This message has been edited by mirror man (edited 11-03-2001).]

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

1 posted 2001-11-03 12:57 PM

This is very nice.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-11-03 02:03 AM

MirrorMan~
You do such a marvelous presentation of your thoughts~
Stunning~
The music is just wonderful~
You are VERY talented, my friend~
Thanks for sharing again with us~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2001-11-03 02:10 AM

MirrorMan, terrific writingNpresentation...
I very much enjoyed this read...
*~coco~*

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2001-11-03 09:45 AM

Thank you all very much. I'm never sure what else to say besides that. Reply to reply later.

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