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Good Morning Cameron (My Last Post)
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Good Morning Cameron (My Last Post) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(It seems everyone has forgotten about me here. I've always dreamed about seeing my dreams come true and making a whole bunch of new friends, but I guess I'm just nothing but a sad strange boy to you all that no one wants. I just want you to know that I loved all your wonderful words, and may God bless you all!) Good Morning Cameron By: Noah Eaton 11/2/01 I don't think that I can take it anymore Help me stay alive, I've broken into pieces You died before my eyes, yet I didn't follow you Put my pride back together before it decays It was a bad quarter of an hour, the night had came quickly I'm just waiting to catch a falling star To be loved and touched by others Now I have no friends, and I speak through all my tears Good morning, Cameron How have things been going lately? Good morning, Cameron Can you see me? Good morning, Cameron I don't know what was the bigger waste of time Mourning of your loss or wishing it was me Since you've been gone, the carousel has abstained And I try to fix the motor, but it just won't spin back And Rene Magritte still has a green forest behind a glistening blue lake But the sky hanging above has turned black Every single time I spin on the ol' tire swing There's a silhouette of you hanging on the monkey bars I have no picture of you I can hang on to My photo album is empty, and I have no happy memories Good morning, Cameron Does the sun shine bright up there? Good morning, Cameron Good luck, and take care Good morning, Cameron I only wish you could live to see all your dreams come true I don't know what was the bigger waste of time Mourning of your loss or wishing it was me Now you're gone and I have no friends All my childhood is shattered and I have no dreams come true And I pray you haven't forgotten me too Don't leave me alone... Don't leave me alone... Good morning, Cameron Here's to those days and nights Good morning, Cameron Here's to those tears you've cried Good morning, Cameron Will I ever find my dreams I don't know what was the bigger waste of time Mourning of your loss or wishing it was me Wishing it was me... Wishing it was me... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
No, it's not true that no one here cares. I know that for a fact, cause I do, and I know lots of others do too. SO please stay with us, you are a big part of Passions. And on another note, this is a really good poem, I like the way you used the repitition. It was very effective. Please stay Noah. Luv Sandra |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'd like to know where you got the idea that we forgot about you???? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah! Good Heavens! How could we ever forget you? Not that we would ever want to. You are a very important part of Passions...no one wants you to leave. You wrote me that beautiful poem as you have for others and your messages are so filled with love....along with an aching for a love of your own...which will come in time sweetie. You are young, give life a chance! Please stay Noah....email me if you think it might help. Love ya, NancyLee. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, Sometimes a post can be overlooked. This is a very fast board, so please don't bail on us so early in the game. You are too good a writer, and too kind a person for us to lose. Annie Look into the eyes of a man and |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't go anywhere Noah...if you are going through some hard times you will make it...believe me all of us within this forum have experienced hard times in our lives where we have lost loved one's or romances have failed...we write of those sad moments and we will write of beautiful times as well...James |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Noah you are a very special poet here in Passions. Always with special words and blessings to your friends. What would we do without you? I mean that! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
NOAH!!! WHY???? Is it because sometimes I missed a post or two? Here's a big smoochy hug, just for you.  Hang in there. This forum moves too fast for me sometimes too. Some of my best poetry (In my opinion anyway) gets lost faster that the speed of light when the board is very active. Please stick around, as your youthful fresh approach to love is very refreshing to me.   Feel better yet? |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Noah!! Nooooooo don't leave! You are a very special friend to me, Passions wouldn't be the same without you. Please reconsider I beg you. ((hugs)) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Don't go. If you are going through sometehing painful, believe me this is the place to be. There are so many hands that will stretch out and help you stand again. So many caring souls that want to help you through it... you can't find a more heartfelt support system. Alot of people here love your poetry.. I am one of them. You offer dreams of love and hope and wonder... we all need that world you describe so well. I've only begun to talk to you and can see what a caring loving person you are. You would be greatly missed here. Stay... please? Big warm giant hugs to you Noah. Tara [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Noah, now you know I love you sweet one. Things sound a little hard for you right now, but believe me dear one, we have all felt what you are feeling. Yes, each and every last one of us. When we feel life has left us behind. And we feel that there is no point in getting back up again. But believe you me, there is a point in getting back up again. For somewhere, sometime, you will look back on this time in your life, and wonder what you were worrying for. Just trust me on this. I've done a lot of living, and been where you are more than once. And believe me dear friend, there is always a light at the end of the tunnel. It may seem dim and distant, but draw closer, and see the beauty of that light. You may not see it immediately, but you will sweet one....you will. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Passions is a family, my friend, and when one of the family goes away, it's a tremendous loss - so you have to stay, family isn't forgotten until it's gone...and even then, memories survive - so you're never forgotten. jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm with deVine. . . what makes you think that you've been forgotten??? and so do the other people that have answered your post. . . remember, no one is ever forgotten. . . this is excellent. . . I'd like to see more, and hope that you reconsider your decision. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Noah ... this was written with such genuine warmth, sincerity and heart ... it is absolutely lovely. Thank you for reaching into my life tonight with this tender and emotive piece. Just beautiful.  Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Noah~ I've always loved your sweet replies and the poems of yours I've read. I'm sorry if I missed some of them. I'd like to be your friend if you'll have me! Email me anytime, I would certainly love to hear from you! Please don't go...I haven't had a chance to get to know you yet. I haven't truly made many friends here yet either...it's hard when there's so many of us out there isn't it? So please stay... Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! I'd be happy to e-mail you, sweet Krista, I too have a Hotmail account, so we can IM each other! (smiles) As soon as I can, I will contact you, for you and the rest of you are all true friends to me it seems! (smiles May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Noah, So does this mean that you are staying???? I really hope so because if not I am going to be verrrry upset! |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
noah. i like yer poimes. stay here or i will be forced to come to your house and explain to you the error of your mistake. that and buy you a cup of cappucchino and let you go all late-teen angsty and get it out of your system. and *ahem* BS at the "i've been forgotten" thing - i read your stuff every time i come on the board, so don't give me that :P neeneer neeneer neeeneeer. ~does pratfalls to cheer you up~ -Napalm |
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BldWhtRose Junior Member
since 2001-09-24
Posts 38Alabama USA |
Noah, I have not forgotten you, since I am new here, I have never met you ! I have read here for a while, joined a month ago to comment , and 2 days ago did my first 2 posts .... If what you wrote here was about a loss you are suffering , my heart aches for you, I too have lost SO many in life, either due to death or just circumstances of life, I am going through somewhat of a loss myself currently... This poem , though heartbreaking , was incredibly well written and we would all miss great poetry like this .... Don't leave us !!! And I for one , would like to know more about who Cameron was to you ! Thank You for a beautiful dedication to someone obviously so loved and missed ! [This message has been edited by BldWhtRose (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sweetie, nobody is ignored in this family of PoetFriends at least from my perspective the moment I clic my browser2bring me here I instantly feel connected to many of you who I hold dear and even when I'm not here everyday many of my PoetFriends are with me in thought and heart... So add me2the list of our friends above and stay awhile more 2discover what this friendship is that I truly speak of... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
 But we do remember you! Check here! Stay around, ok?  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ok, buddy...snap out of it. Don't make us come out there and get you, it's scary in cyberworld. Noah, you have replied to several of my posts, though I'm afraid I have been negligent of late in my own responding. I apologize for that but allow me to say now, that this is a very good poem. You have alot of talent for a young man. Would be a shame if you choose not to share that with us any longer. Why don't you drop in the workshop one of these days. The playground's great there (and I can introduce you to all the cute girls). |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Noah, you are one of the sweetest poets here. But let me tell you something ok? There is a ton of poetry here, daily! Why no one can read them all. Just because you don't get a lot of replies, please don't feel you aren't as much a part of this place and you should and have so much to give and you do. The most important thing (and believe me I know) is loving and sharing with those around you, Noah, yes, those around you. Nothing wrong with making friends online, I have. But don't make the screen the center of your world the way I have for the past 3 years. Write poetry, post it, it will be read. You don't always know just b/c someone doesn't reply maybe they are busy. God bless you no matter what you decide. Just don't think we don't care, b/c I for one do! Kathleen |
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