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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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You hold a special part of me in your palms A part that is delicate yet precious Everytime you wrap me in your arms You leave me feeling breathless I see a world beyond happiness In the reflection of your eyes First time I've ever felt like this It is you who makes me alive You wipe my insecurities away And rid me of my fears I realize that nothing's perfect When my pillow absorbs my tears I wish I had you to snuggle up to but all I have is this teddy bear Whenever I think about you The scent of our love fills the air I can see your angelic face Floating around in my mind You kiss has a cotton candy taste A sugar sweetness one of a kind I wrap myself tight Feeling the warmth of my covers Our hearts beat for eachother at night It's the special music of two lovers [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh my can I ever connect with this one. Only I don't have a teddy bear but a body pillow I try to snuggle up to. Somehow it just isn't the same. *sigh* I would love to hear the special music of two lovers. Now I am yearning beneath a full moon. BRAVO!!!A masterpiece.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beatiful! (sigh) His love will always shine in your heart! Maybe someday I can love someone like this! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Lovely poem and thoughts. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very sweet and full of love. Thanks for sharing. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the cotton candy stuff. YUM. One of the reasons I go to the County Fair each year. And give that Teddy Bear an extra hug for the rest of us. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Rose, this ROCKS and rolls with love and passion..... oh how i love this!!!!!! |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Every now and then we need a teddy bear to hug up on! I like this one : ) Do or die! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Innocent and longing...Teddy bears are wonderful too! Very nice flow RosePetal! Enjoyed... Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Rosepetal, Ahh I know this feeling. Wanting nothing more than to cuddle up with the one you love *sighs* I need to get me a teddy bear  Enjoyed muchly Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Love has come to town, within the dulcet phrases of "You" Willie B |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Rosepetal...this is outstanding, perfectly wriiten longing of love..great read.. alan |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank you all for the support and kind words!!! All of you have inspired me with your poetry as well. Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment, it is very much appreciated! RP |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like you have someone really special in your thoughts...James |
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