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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 03:45 PM



If this offends any reader, please have the courtesy to
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It is not my intent to offend anyone and I AM capable of editing almost anything.
~*~

we meet in the room
the best hotel in this town
this is the moment
~*~
she comes to my arms
willfully and wantonly
there is no pretense
~*~
her eyes search my soul
while messaging her desire
she embraces me
~*~
slowly my hands work
unbuttoning her silk blouse
one by one by one
~*~
desire is building
passions soaring with control
one by one by one
~*~
my arms encircle
Her breath a series of gasps
The door bursts open
~*~
the ATF guy
apologizes and says
must be the wrong room



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-02 03:50 PM


*giggling* well at least this one still has a chance of working out. Now where were we? LOL

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Decaflame
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2 posted 2001-11-02 03:59 PM



How the heck do passions soar with control?  Ah, you do me blushing....

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-11-02 04:06 PM


tell the guy to beat it  
SmittenKitten
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4 posted 2001-11-02 04:06 PM



Hehehe   foiled again!  Although I'm not so sure that ATF guy was there by accident...you probably planned it!  Hehe...I wouldn't blame you...how's that stamina of yours doing?

Hugs,
~Krista



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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-02 04:09 PM


I think you're running out of steam!  You could have not opened the door!  Will he make it to the end?  And...what's up for Sea?  Saving the best for last I think!  

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Interloper
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6 posted 2001-11-02 04:10 PM


Startime ~
Naw.  Once the ATF blows the hinges off the door and enters the room with five masked hombres pointing shotgus and automatic rifles atcha, one sorta loses the urge  

Deca ~
You do controlled passion one by one by one  

SEA ~
Yeah.  I'll tell those armed hombres to beat it.  I'm big and mean but not stoopid

Krista ~
I'm holding up surprisingly well taking into consideration all the interruptions

enchantress ~
I admit it.  I'm saving SEA for last.  Gonna make her sweat.




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).]

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2001-11-02 04:41 PM


yep, it's working....I've never had much patience and I think I've used up almost all of my reserves!!! LOL  
SmartChick
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8 posted 2001-11-02 05:18 PM


Lost the urge?
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Gaia
9 posted 2001-11-02 05:35 PM


LOL, those ATF people have such bad timing, unlike you, Interloper.  
And it should be very interesting to SEA what happens next.
Deca, looks like you'll have to wait for the next 'loper.

walker
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10 posted 2001-11-02 06:51 PM


You still got it
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