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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 01:40 PM


If this offends any reader, please have the courtesy to
POST YOUR COMMENT
and send me an Email.  

It is not my intent to offend anyone and I AM capable of editing almost anything.
~*~


Jenn likes busy men
so I am always busy
busy as a bee
~*~
busy is not fast
you must understand right now
we must take it slow
~*~
while lips are engaged
fingers mapping her contour
so busy but slow
~*~
honey is her treat
I wonder about whipped cream
While fingers still map
~*~
honey tastes so good
I still think about whipped cream
now lips are mapping
~*~
The Days of Our Lives
fills the television screen
she squeals with delight
~*~
you go buy whipped cream
said she, we will resume
right after the show



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).]

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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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1 posted 2001-11-02 01:43 PM


that was fairly mild IMO. but if you worry post things like this on the adult forum next time. Thanks for sharing.  

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-02 03:17 PM


LOL a tasty treat seems to await you once the show is over. LOL oh gosh maybe during a commercial you can sneak in a little love.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-11-02 03:22 PM


hmmmmmm soap?? or yummy man???  
you don't even have to think of my answer...
but here is a hint....


THE MAN!!  

SmartChick
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4 posted 2001-11-02 03:45 PM


LOL! How long does the show last?
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-02 04:06 PM


Ah gee..and I was thinking, 'maybe this time'!  Better luck next one Interloper!  Most tame these are now....dude!

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SmittenKitten
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6 posted 2001-11-02 04:09 PM



Hehe, pushed aside for a tv show!  Poor romantic Interloper.  But no worries, he's probably already on his way to the next lady!  

Hugs,
~Krista

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 11-02-2001).]

walker
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7 posted 2001-11-02 06:39 PM


You won't come back, will go right to the next one Another great one.
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8 posted 2001-11-02 07:10 PM


Whipped cream, umm...I think I know someone who used to love making homemade whipped cream.
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