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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-11-02 11:43 AM


I wished upon a falling star, tonight
This wish I made, was just for you
To put a special love into your life
A love that will always be so true

Someone to take away your sorrow
And make your world be all bright
Who will be there for you tomorrow
And bring into your life some light

A special person who will love you
And always care about how you feel
Who will always want to be there too
To take care of you when you're ill

This is a wish, that I did wish for you
A love to make all your dreams come true
© By Sue 11-2-01


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-11-02 10:33 PM


Sue,
What a generous poem! I really like this. Well done.  

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-02 10:36 PM


What a wonderful heart you have to make such a wish. This is beautiful, SmartChick, and shows us what a loving and compassionate person you are. ***hugs***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-11-02 10:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this sonnet is sooooooo beautiful and will touch the heart of your friend so beautifully! (sigh) God Bless You, your beautiful heart shines with compassion and the magic of love! (sigh) Maybe someday I can have a love like this! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2001-11-02 11:23 PM


To Larry C
   Thank you, Lrry! I am glad you liked it.

To Startime
   Thank you, Startime! This wish is for everyone. I didn't think to post it that way.

To Mistletoe Angel
   Thank you for the compliment. I am glad you like it.

catalinamoon
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5 posted 2001-11-03 05:11 AM


Sue, this is so sweet, and its the same wish I have for all of us, to have the right love in our life. Thanks for writing this.
Sandra

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Gaia
6 posted 2001-11-03 05:31 AM


Thank you for this wonderful wish! And you asked us to tell you what type of poem you write? It's the 'right' type... for my last read before tucking myself in tonight.
Thanks!

Mon Cherie
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7 posted 2001-11-03 08:53 AM


Oh my!! This is so sweet...
I really need this generous wish you've wished right now. My life seems so barren without love... ha... =P

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