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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I see him in the stars at night I see him in dawns early light Not here, not gone, a part of me withdrawal hiding what could be. I see him in that special way a touch of soul, of heart at bay His reticence still steals my joy behavior not of man, but boy. I see him touch me, can't forget the love I felt when we first met All over now, out of my life this knowledge still cuts like a knife. I see him in my yesterday and wish somehow he could have stayed My tears are of irrelevance because his love has all been spent. To see tomorrow as a hope the only way that I can cope Perhaps to know love once again not just as somewhere I have been. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I just love this. It is such a beauiful poem. |
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Nature Girl Junior Member
since 2001-10-19
Posts 31 |
lovely! [This message has been edited by Nature Girl (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
damn, this makes me sweat! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sandra, I just know you will again, and it will be all the sweeter in the knowing..very gentle smile |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I think your last stanza sums it all up nicely, Sandra. It's called moving on. Be well, my friend. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sandra, "To see tomorrow as a hope the only way that I can cope Perhaps to know love once again not just as somewhere I have been." This is an awesome statement, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~I see him in that special way a touch of soul, of heart at bay~ Nice lines, all of them! It's hard to watch and let go at the same time. There is much sadness and strength in your words. Nicely done Sandra~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I see new possibilities for you...no one likes to lose a love but love can live in everyones heart...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I see lost loves as a learning experience and no matter how hard they are to get over, we take from them what we did learn to the next, and the next, until one day, presto, a soul mate! This was wonderful Sandra, and extremely lovely use of words throughout. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
To see tomorrow as a hope the only way that I can cope Perhaps to know love once again not just as somewhere I have been. I love these lines they seem like a sunrise or a new start to me. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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