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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-11-02 11:07 AM


Full Moon Sounds

beneath full moon where silence sounds
amid the float of leaving ground
where all your doubts convene the night
reveal your fears in leave of write...

begin the tell of time swift here
as now all lines of rhyme come near
through all voids one voice shall be heard
gather ‘round for the whispered word

shadows parlay events of eve
inspiration comes though aggrieved
transformation begins anew
treasured words shall stir then this brew

quiet strands of yesterday’s weave
braiding now all the strands we leave
in the wake of the where we’ve been
standing alone in dim of glen

beneath full moon where silence sounds
begins the tell of time swift here
shadows parlay events of eve
quiet strands of yesterday’s weave


Thanks for the inspiration, Sy!


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
janmew
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1 posted 2001-11-02 11:11 AM


I love the flow in this piece! Wonderful!

Poetry is an expression of feelings.  I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves.

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2 posted 2001-11-02 11:11 AM


I watched the full harvest moon rise high into the sky and enjoyed the respite from thinking. *S* But I'm sure glad you were inspired... this is poetic perfection, Sunshine... and so very, very beautiful!!
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3 posted 2001-11-02 11:12 AM


wow, so many perfect lines, I can't pick one or two, I love them all!!!  
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4 posted 2001-11-02 11:13 AM


This was a very good read!!!!!!!!!!
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5 posted 2001-11-02 11:15 AM


Beautiful, sweet lady and you welcome. *L*
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