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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-11-02 07:38 AM


I Dream With You

Following the stars
Cradling in dreams
Touching the night
Slide moonbeams

In hoping the night
Transports me far
Illuminating  skies
Wherever you are

Dreams are yours
Within this space
Moving towards
A loving embrace

Glows from stars
Pleasure enters in
Delights to dream
Radiates my skin

Want in our eyes
Desires we view
Kissing me deep
I dream with you

Hope © 2001


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The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 414
Texas
1 posted 2001-11-02 08:14 AM


I love dreams.  I love poems about dreams and I love, love poems dreams.  *S* This poem fits all of these.  I like its smoothness and flow.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-11-02 09:15 AM


Yes, your dreams fill our lives with beauty and romance. Your words weave a spell around your reader making them desire to see and feel your dream. Magnificent. I love it.  
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2001-11-02 09:24 AM


Thanks Rusty Knight pleased you followed the flow and enjoyed  

Hope

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2001-11-02 09:26 AM


thanks Karen , yes dreams of romance
my heart flies free , takes the chance
Hope

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