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WRBreezin
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0 posted 2001-11-02 05:17 AM



The Sultry Swirl


She lives
a garnet rivulet
sun sweet grapes
pressed to be a memory maker
An empty wine bottle
rather than a dust covered thought
corked and untouched
waiting in endless reserve
The spirit of her fruit's resolve
better served in the belly of the world
A taste of reckless passion
its love and daring sting
a sweet stain on tippling lips
Swooned by the deep red velvet lust
a woman's need swift turning
to a man's addiction
The sultry swirl she is
a leash upon a ready tongue


Willie
©2001


© Copyright 2001 Robert Joseph - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2001-11-02 07:29 AM


Ooh, a sultry write indeed. I'm swooning !!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

WRBreezin
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2 posted 2001-11-02 10:22 PM



Thanks Tracey, I'm glad ya enjoyed this one!!

Willie B

Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-03 09:32 AM


*sigh* now this one left me feeling all warm inside. Well done. You write in a very unique and interesting way.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:41 AM


This piece seems to play on one's senses. So sensual... ^.^
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5 posted 2001-11-03 10:00 AM


Willie--Very unique...word choice and vision..vine ripe!
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Gaia
6 posted 2001-11-03 01:37 PM


Ah, the sweet warm taste of the wine of love. Well done, Willie.
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2001-11-03 02:20 PM


That's some heady wine!!
I liked the way you served this up,
and your title made it even more appealing.

Nice!


rwood
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8 posted 2001-11-03 02:47 PM


Keeping this! I'll take 5 bottles please.
Very smashingly sensual..and very tasty too.

Sincerely,
Regina

WRBreezin
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9 posted 2001-11-03 09:51 PM


Startime, Mon Cherie, Martie, Midnitesun, Blues Serenade, and Regina

Thanks so much, each response is certainly appreciated!

Willie B

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