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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-02 03:53 AM


Sweet Jin


I want you close
so I can kiss you again.
I want you so close
that I'll never miss you again.
I want you close
so while we melt
into each others arms
I can feel each and every
pleasure of your silky charms.
I want you close
so that I can forever say
sweet Jin is the best gift
from heaven that ever
graced my day.


JamesLee
November02
2001


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2001-11-02 03:55 AM


James: How lucky Sweet Jin is to have a friend in you    Bravo !!  well written!
Roniece

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-02 08:51 AM


*sigh* Ah, yes, she is indeed a very lucky lady. Take her in your arms and hold her close. Love is such a beautiful gift. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-11-02 04:20 PM


You tell me that you love me and your always thinking of me and that you'll love me until the end of time...it's too wonderful, it's too marvelous...are you really, really mine...
Yes I love to hear the words from her mouth that she loves me but I still have doubts...I've been through this befoe...time will tell the story..James

walker
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4 posted 2001-11-02 07:32 PM


Beautiful, James.
jwesley
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5 posted 2001-11-02 08:01 PM


Beautiful expression here James...

jwesley

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-11-02 08:29 PM


I will hope that she knows enough to appreciate you properly. I didn't know men waited to hear those words too..
Sandra

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-11-03 02:35 AM


Thank you walker, jwesley and Sandra...
Yes Sandra when my sweetheart tells me she loves me it melts my heart and my heart gets softer and softer for her...James

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