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A Cordial Invitation
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A Cordial Invitation |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I need to curl up on the couch. (It's big enough for two.) I need to trace my fingers laced between the lines of you. I want your nose to notice the oils that I donned. Even though you won't be here-- still I dab them on. I want to feel my legs in tangle rubbing legs in crickets song Entertwined in touch divine I'll be soft. You be strong. Let's watch the travel channel and dream of what could be-- stroke my head and kiss my throat fingertips adrift at sea... Hold me, listen, tell me tales-- secrets you have kept in jail... tell me, show me everything-- I can be so comforting. I'll rock you-- sing you lullabyes. I'll ease the pain. I'll hypnotize... I'll look so far into your eyes and never blink until sun's rise. So come beneath the blanket please. Surely you will come with me. Let us have a war of knees-- as we do not watch tv...  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
serenity, I feel an assault coming on... |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
My couch is big enough for four. *grins* Tell you what. I'll come over to your house tonight, and we can use your couch. And tomorrow night, you can come over to my house. And you can bring some friends. And we can use my couch. Sound good? *grins* I thought so. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Ser..this is just lovely.  I need a couch partner like that! Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Taking a travel through the channels, now there's a thought! (Clicking off that remote and dimming the switch) I enjoyed the cozy feel of this. Really nice writing Serenity. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It's nice to have a couch buddy...especially when she gets all over me...James |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds wonderful! A sweet cozy poem, missy!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh what a lovely invitation this is hon Maree |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hope he shows up, if not he is missing out.. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! A couch buddy.....now why didn't I think of that. This is a wonderful invitation. Any man would be nuts to turn it down. Well done.Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i'm sorry i'm busy tonight i have to do my nails *wink* but maybe we can meet for brunch tomorrow morning? i'll bring the bagels if you bring the cream cheese but we'll have to go out to a park or something... no blankets!!! we'll sit on a bench, drink coffee and talk... i'm sorry, i can't do the couch thing... sounds like fun though for someone but it ain't me babe, no no no, it ain't me babe, it ain't me you're lookin' for babe lol!!!!! hey harpo...... hope all is well withya!! great write here, my friend |
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Glenn Logan Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 111Virginia |
Nice peice of writing, with some wonderful images. Best wishes, Glenn Logan |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Awww  This is one of those warm and fuzzies. A couch buddy, I like that Who needs tv when you can knock knees?!  Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a wonderful invitation. I love it Watch out for the censors, dear. They x,cndkhk. See what they do? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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