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0 posted 2001-11-01 10:08 PM



Too Good To Be True
By: Noah Eaton
11/1/01

I dream of a love so pretty
One that I’m eager to hold someday
But then I wake up and my heart is blue
I realize it’s too good to be true

I dream I’m holding the most beautiful girl close to me
I laugh and smile when I hear her breathe
Then I wake up and I choke with sorrows flu
It was too good to be true

Every time I see her I feel so happy
I feel free in revealed fantasies
Then I see her disappear, and I watch her cry so terribly
As I return to my prison behind these iron bars in melancholy

I dream I’m dancing with you in the moonlight
And we share our first kiss together in the amethyst twilight
When the skies bleed black and blue and my body is freezing mute
It was all too good to be true

I dream I’m lifting your veil on a white wedding
I kiss your lovely face and we begin a new happy beginning
Then you run away, and leave my heart feeling maroon
I’m a fool, it was too good to be true

I thought I had this one chance
This one chance to love anyone at all
And now there’s nothing left, I’m all alone again
I have no friends to talk it over, and I feel my world fall

I dream I’m making love on the beach with you
Listening to the waves crash against the shore under the moon
Then you say “Goodbye!” as you begin crying and you run away so soon
I can’t help but believe that my love is too good to be true

Is it too good to be true?
Is my heart born to be lonely forever?
Do I have a love in my life?
Do I deserve to be loved?

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2001-11-01 10:28 PM


Ah Noah, just give it time. All this will come true and more. I promise you it will. It just takes a little patience. Someone will love you and that big heart of yours. You have so much love to give, and you will find someone deserving of it

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-01 10:29 PM


Give yourself time, dear Noah, and all your dreams will come true. Keep your dreams alive and share their beauty will all around you. A beautiful dream that will someday be reality.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
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3 posted 2001-11-02 08:57 AM


Oh yes, Noah. Everyone deserves to be loved. And, your love is out there waiting for you.
walker
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4 posted 2001-11-02 07:16 PM


Love is so precious but it can also be hurtful. It took me a long time to find true love, and even though its been rough its all worth it. Don't give up Noah, you'll find it soon. Good Luck.
doreen peri
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5 posted 2001-11-02 08:18 PM


i told you before....... she's out there waiting for you... because YOU are a precious gift full of passion, love, and with a beautiful soul, sweet young friend.....

keep writing like this.... it's really fabulous!!!

A Whisper's Caress
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6 posted 2001-11-03 12:52 PM


the tragedy of a young heart so full of passion is they sometimes settle what comes first. wait sweet noah, it will happen...

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

rosepetals25
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7 posted 2001-11-03 09:04 AM


Noah,

   You are so sweet. As the others have told you, you will find your love. You are so young... you have so much time.  Don't be discouraged... she is waiting for you just as you are waiting for her.  Beautiful and wistful poem.. I loved it. :kiss*


Hugs,
Tara

Don't marry for money...  You can borrow it cheaper!

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