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You Are --- Dedicated To Sven ---
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~*Dedicated to Sven*~  You Are  Across the universe you take me over the bridge of breathtaking and into the sea of your soul through the deep, unending cleanse of your waves, your words tango across my tongue, I taste the rhythm of your fantasies and freefall with the ink spill from your unmatched quill, yes, take a bow, great one, and smile for your applause... painter of love, breath of beauty, magician of imagery, you are all these and so much more that even I fail to give birth to, friend, you are beautiful, you are poetry, you mirror reverie across the lavender lace fields of tranquility and I am set free from just one kiss of your heart, friend, poet, you touch me and my eyes open to infinity By Melissa P. Monette |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!!! I LOVE IT!!! JOHN WILL LOVE THIS SWEET TRIBUTE ALWAYS!!! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! Your words are always soooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) He is the beautiful loving person you speak of and so much more, just like you are! (smiles) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Melissa, this is a beautiful tribute to Sven. Such wonderful words and so very very true. I think he's gonna be thrilled. I'm gonna say here Sven...I agree totally with what Melissa says, and I'm gonna bet a lot of others do too. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A magnificent tribute to a very deserving man. You have used your talent to bless one that is so very special to us all. BRAVO!!!Sven will love this gem.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, You never cease to amaze me with the beauty of your words. What a completely exquisite poem of praise for an amazing poet. I'm sure Sven will be touched beyond words. Well done  Hugs to ya chickie  Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Melissa, This is a great tribute to a wonderful poet. Sven is all these things and more! I am sure he will love this! Great write! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Melisaa this is a wonderful tribute to Sven! He will be absolutely touched and thrilled  I too will take this opportunity to add a hearty ditto from myself... Isis |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
melissa...such a beautiful poem to a beautiful poet...helen |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh*  You, Lady, are the Queen of words like this! These are beautifully done for a wonderful man. The more people who realize what a gift he is, the better.  Lovely! Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Melissa: How beautifully written this is!! My how thrilled Sven will be to read this piece written for him - Brava Brava!!! Roniece |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Melissa, sweet wondrous poet, What an incredible tribute to Sven! So often we say such tnings after friends are gone from us, how wonderful to hear them and realize what a gift we are to others! Love and Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
And there was a Chorus of "AMEN", A wonderful tribute to a talented poet and friend, WELL DONE Sweet Melissa |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Agreed, John is a wonderful poet and friend. You certainly said it beautifully. Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
BEAUTIFUL tribute for our amazing poet John, Wonderful penned and you translate many feelings with your words. Thank you so much for sharing Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
one word...~BEAUTIFUL~ He is all that and more. Lovely tribute. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . .  I'm just. . .well, I'm at a loss for words. . . thank you all so much. . . and thank you Melissa. . . you're a wonderful person, a good friend and the Queen of Romance. . . you've made my day. . . and I'm glad that you're all my friends. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, you are oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands INDEED Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven I see you are really touching some ladies hearts with you poetic expertise... let me add that you are an excellent poet...James |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful poem to a beautiful poet. A big fan of Sven, I am. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful tribute to a very nice man. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sven....Zen. Loving, peaceful, truthful. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
It's no secret Sven...You are so very special and talented! I appreciate you so...A true Listener! And Melissa~ Wow......This is a gorgeous portrait of a precious heart...from yours. Amazing write! Sincerely, Regina |
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LoveLetters Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 35State of Hope |
You write beautifully from the images of your heart it seems. This is an excellent dedication to who I am sure is a good man. Love has many masks. I am but one of them. |
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