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Larry C
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0 posted 2001-11-01 09:28 PM


Interloper, I Got Them All At Once!
By Larry Chadwick

I'm not suggesting Interloper is a tramp,
I do believe he is quite a scamp.
Doing Passions women one by one,
It seems a precedent he has begun.

While all of them I do certainly adore,
My plan will probably put you on the floor.
I’m going to do them all at the same time,
One fell swoop, one sweet little rhyme.

I’m certainly going to forget a few,
Not because I didn’t want you too.
The list goes something like this,
Midnitesun, and Enchantress,

SEA, and Startime as well,
And I have to include Marge Tindal.
SmittenKitten and Decaflame,
Catalinamoon, cpalm none the same.

Greeneyes and Trace on the list,
SmartChick is a part of this.
DawnG and Melissa Honeybee,
And I don’t dare for forget Lucie.

And on this night so special to me,
One more woman I want to see.
I’d want her alone if I could,
And that has to be ms. rwood.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-02-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-01 09:38 PM


BRAVO!!!!!BRAVO!!!Oh how wonderful. You have done a magnificent job. rwood will swoon when she reads this.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-01 09:41 PM


lissen here i can only agree
you can't impress girls with poetry
especially when you post them one then another
o and look rwood is calling you brother

Tracey
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3 posted 2001-11-01 09:49 PM


ROFLAMO!!! Can I have a cigarette after that please??? Whew, I'm exhausted for some reason, though not as exhausted as I expect you are!!! AND HOW COME REGINA GETS TO HAVE YOU ALONE?????

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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4 posted 2001-11-01 09:56 PM


Gee, I was left out this time.

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (edited 11-02-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-11-01 09:58 PM


YES!  Why does Regina get you alone??? AND...why is she calling you 'brother'?  Something is fishy here, me thinks!
Good write though Larry.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SmartChick
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6 posted 2001-11-01 09:58 PM


I hit the wrong letter. I meant Gee.
Larry C
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7 posted 2001-11-01 11:11 PM


Startime,
Thanks for being such a kind participant.    

wayoutwalt,
Well, I guess you have to learn to live with mistakes!  

Tracey,
See, now I'm just impressed you weren't complaining about the group thing.  

Enchantress,
I'm not sure about fishy, but I know it stinks!    
See my post on rwood's poem for the brother correction.

SmartChick,
Errors are meant to be correctted!  

And now for a message from my wife...

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-02-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-11-02 09:17 AM


Larry, this is a really fun read, thanks for throwing me in the middle  LOL good job!  
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9 posted 2001-11-02 09:21 AM


Hi Larry, this was fun, but I too am wondering how Regina got so lucky  
Good job, though, no anyts..no kelp..no problem  LOL
Sandra

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10 posted 2001-11-02 12:17 PM



hehehe   Are you dreamin again Larry?  Sounds like a party to me!  You want a little romance, you'll have to find me when I'm alone   

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Lucie
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11 posted 2001-11-02 12:46 PM


Sweet Larry C, just wanted to say
you included me, and that's OK.
But after our joust of fun poetry
there's no way you'll forget me.

Nice to see my name here all the same.
And glad you joined my jousting game.
I think its time for one more round.
So hold on sweets... your going down.

With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.


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12 posted 2001-11-02 12:50 PM


Uh, now WHY didn't I think of that.  Oh, I remember.  It's all Krista's fault.  Here kitty, kitty, kitty ... daddy wants a word.

Why did you put Sy on that list?  Am I misinformed or isn't Sy a guy?

I thought xflkjhkjf,ghk.

Drat, those meddlesome censors AGAIN!


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).]

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2001-11-02 12:52 PM


Sy's a guy Sy's a guy
I didn't wanna say it

rwood
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14 posted 2001-11-03 07:53 AM


What's this tryst going on behind my back???
Well Mr. Buttercup you better pucker up to the task!!!  Cause I'm feeling a little crazy so get off your lazy arsenal of passion! I'm headed right for you and nothing's gonna save you from this Mountain Woman's grasp! You'll feel like the dew's been dropped outa you...My little clover rover. I guess the true meanin' of Love is when a person stalks you till ya finally give in! LOL!   What can I say....You're my Brother...but you're starting to look awful darn good in the dark!

Sincerely,
Regina

[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 11-03-2001).]

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15 posted 2001-11-03 09:00 AM


This is cute!! And very well done. But you missed about a thousand women here Larry! Wouldn't it be better to ask each female poet to write about YOU. Then there would be thousands of 'Larry' poems!!    
Larry C
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16 posted 2001-11-03 10:12 AM


Hey Everybody,
Gotta go to church. But believe me, I'm working on my replies for tonight!  

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