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LoveLetters
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since 2001-10-09
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State of Hope

0 posted 2001-11-01 09:19 PM


i realize, as I write i these poems that my wanderings are cliche ridden, but they are on the direct path from my heart. That said, I think its fair enough to let them out for the sake of writing honestly. Enjoy or disapprove. Either way I hope it touches.


How could I need you with desperation unequaled?
You tried my heart more than once
As I enjoyed the enticement of your arms.
Tonight the rain seeks my soul
And all for the pleasure of joyful tears.
My body shakes and quivers
With the burden of missing you
And just knowing your lips whisper
Creates my smile and dreams of peace.
This distance is getting harder to bear, my love
And I may tire of writing these cliches
But I will never tire of feeling them.
You have introduced a new music into my world.
I have known the notes of many new songs
But yours is as different
As all of them were.
I believe I have found a favorite.
I long for you now as I am sighing these words.
I live for you it seems
For you are Love.
Thank you for setting up residence in my hopeless heart.

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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1 posted 2001-11-01 09:47 PM


*sigh* a beautiful and heartfelt love letter. It touched my heart. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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2 posted 2001-11-01 09:48 PM


I think your exploration isn't fluff at all!
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3 posted 2001-11-01 11:27 PM


the heart is not a cliche. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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