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rwood
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0 posted 2001-11-01 09:06 PM


Many daze I sit and wonder
If my love will ever rise
From the other side of yonder
In the weepin’ willow skies

The water’s rushin’ through the mountain
Flowin’ cold along the stones
Need my baby to relieve me
Before I’m just a bag of bones

~See the lily’s done guilded
And my lips have met a man
He left me here singing
On this muddy river bank~

But I know he’s comin’ for me
I’m a waiting for his hand
There’s gotta be another daydream
In this God forsaken land

So I pose here for my baby
Just in case he comes around
Hidin’ from My Brother Larry
Cause he thinks I’m cousin Sal

© Copyright 2001 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-11-01 09:19 PM


o yuh i need ta get on your good side fer shur
Tracey
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2 posted 2001-11-01 09:27 PM


Ah Regina, this is too cute. And such a good response to Larry. Ya got style lady!! I can't wait to see what he has to say to this!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Larry C
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3 posted 2001-11-01 09:32 PM


Regina,
I think your spell checker took some unusual liberties. Corrections follow. See "Interloper, I Got Them All At Once". I'll still need the showers in fact I'm on my way now!  

Titled: God Forsaken, But Not Forgotten

So I pose here for my baby
I'm sure he's coming around
Waiting for my lover Larry
I'm more than just his pal


[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-02-2001).]

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-01 09:54 PM


*giggling* absolutely delightful. You are all such a blast. I have never been so well entertained.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
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5 posted 2001-11-01 10:06 PM


This is so entertaining. I just love it. You guys are great.
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2001-11-01 10:15 PM




(giggles) Soooooooo cute! We are all deep down brothers and sisters to each other and I just love how our love grows between us all! (smiles) I love it! (big hugggssssss) I love it! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Lovem
Noah Eaton

rwood
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7 posted 2001-11-02 06:08 AM


Walty: Hey! I'm harmless.....sort of...

Tracey: Thanx for you! Thanx for playing along. This place is so much fun.  

Larry: Hey! Just cause I can't spell that good don't mean you can turn things into a non-family affair! You can't be my lover...You're my Brother! It's against God's nature of thangs! Mama's been tellin you that now since you hit puberty.
So quit tellin' all my beaus I'm taken!

Karen: After his little mix of my words I'm laughing too. He's good!

Smartchick:Thanks! So glad we can liven your day   Gotta watch them funny Brothers.

Noah: That's right! I love Larry...but I don't LLLLLuuuuvvvv him...It's in a differnt nature...I love you too Noah!

SmittenKitten
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8 posted 2001-11-02 11:58 AM



Regina~ hehehe   I couldn't have wished for a better reply to his shower poem!  This is hilarious Regina, good one!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Auguste
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9 posted 2001-11-02 12:33 PM


and thank you for another smile.    Enjoyed it much, Regina!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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10 posted 2001-11-02 12:52 PM


Wunderful ritin' Regina.  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Larry C
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11 posted 2001-11-02 10:31 PM


Regina,
Oh my goodness it's all a mistake,
Liberties considered I shouldn't take.
It's my computer not yours that's down,
Me, I'm left feelin' just like a clown.

Not only that I've needed a sister dear,
Now I've found one, I'm going to cheer.
From now on she's just my buttercup,
Any ideas how I can hook her up?


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