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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-11-01 08:24 PM


So how does one define ones'self, what measure of a man
determines worth when here on Earth so little goes to plan ?
In contrast to a work-place stark, resounds the call of meadowlark
to once again ignite that spark imagination seeks to fan .

Replaced are bills with rolling hills in ev'ry subtle shade of green .
As tasks performed a thunderstorm comingles with a mountain stream .
A pace is set, a quota met, as sunlight filters through the clouds
this drone who serves works' metronome finds solace in what he's allowed .

The measure of a man I'd say by work alone one cannot quoth,
and as for worth, I plan to stay, a doer and a dreamer both .

© Copyright 2001 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-11-01 08:26 PM


awesome o yuh i wanna quit life but who would change the diapers etc! nice write yuh!
Tracey
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2 posted 2001-11-01 08:48 PM


What a brilliant poem, and so true. I'm with you Doc, a doer and a dreamer. There's room to be both in this life

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2001-11-02 09:00 PM


Wayout ,
Thanks much . Enjoyed your write in the workshop .
Doc
Tracey ,
Thank you . Balance in all things , not easy to achieve, yet, perhaps imbalance is a necessary part of the creative process ?

Denise
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4 posted 2001-11-03 03:17 PM


Both are equally important. Very well expressed, Doc!
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5 posted 2001-11-03 03:23 PM


To be a doer and a dreamer...a thought to hold onto each day.  Well done, Doc.
Tiersdin
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6 posted 2001-11-08 06:11 PM


Outstanding!

enjoyed!

~Tier

Larry C
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7 posted 2001-11-12 01:16 AM


Dr.Moose1,
Do Dream on! Great write.  

Andrew Scott
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8 posted 2001-11-12 02:58 PM


Hear! Hear!  As those rock n' rollers Areosmith sang "Dream On"... just don't let them catch you daydreaming at work.  Peace, Doc.
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