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amigo
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0 posted 2001-11-01 07:54 PM


Weaving a maze of mangled thoughts
Chained prisoner is the mind;
Love releases consoling words
Clearing clouded Self-worth within...


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Magnus
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1 posted 2001-11-01 08:04 PM


amazing what we can do when we feel loved.
giving us hope that we are worthy of good
things....Nicely said.

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-01 09:01 PM


It is strange how we are dependent on how others see us. You have written it very well.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amigo
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3 posted 2001-11-04 11:15 AM


Magnus - thank you, glad that you liked it.

Startime - thank you.

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